Next?

Interesting story! Too bad you won’t continue but thank you anyway!

Oi fucket continue this you fucking pathethic bullshit of an author

Fuck this is pathetic he could fucking kill that bitch and leave

Still waiting for update. I hope the Author is okay out there, and i hope he would update the next chapter.

Great storyline looking forward too next chapters

this will be the twelfth time I read this story again

What is up with naruto being a veritable fountain of info? Azazel trying to hide him and how he was turned into a fallen and naruto is just announcing all the secrets to everyone who asks.

please update

Okay you just had Grayfia sttaight up try to tell Ophis "No, fuck off, you cant come along". Do you realize how stupid that is considering who Grayfia and Ophis are as characters? Everyone in this story is either a doormat or has their ass backwards in regards to their personality and actions. Hard pass.

please don't take anybody out of the harem please

Wow Naruto sure is a pansy fag doormat in this. This must be you projecting your pathetic self. Fuck you. Speaking of fucks, guess how many times your mother got fucked by the neighborhood in the hopes to conceive a more worthwhile child than you?

Your Naruto is being particularly dumb here, Kalawarner already TOLD Naruto about the nun, Asia, and Raynare's plans for her. You had Naruto thinking how he'd protect her and not let an innocent be killed like, 3 chapters ago.

Since then, he's done absolutely nothing for the girl, she could've been killed by now. I fail to see how Naruto isn't a failure at this point by Azazael's orders. He's just sitting back and letting Rias do as she pleases and ignoring the fallen angels HE was told to keep in line.

Just so, what, we can get her canon peerage? Why not go a different path, if she'd asked Issei, and included the harem possibility, he'd likely join up on his own, no need to be killed first. And sure as hell no reason to just let Asia suffer.

I cannot really fathom why you felt the need to take Naruto before the dumb ass canon fight where he lost an arm, then STILL remove one of his arms and replace it with some gimmicky, crappy cyber arm. Can he even flow chakra through it?

It just seems lame, it's not like he needs any such gimmicky toys or tools to kick ass. He already has all his fourth war powers and fallen angel powers, hardly needs an arm that becomes a gun or whatever. If you'd done something to lower his power levels, maybe it'd make sense, acting as an equalizer or something while he regained his power. But as is, it's kinda silly.

Why is Rias in the pairing. Authors who write DxD stories honestly have no imagination or creativity when making the pairing. It’s always a harem and it always has Rias and Akeno or one of the 2. I don’t see the point in adding Rias to the harem homely to satisfy the characters ego