You messed up the spelling of chakra slightly? well...

Aoccdrnig to rscheearch at Cmabrigde Uinervtisy, it deosn’t mttaer waht oredr the ltteers in a wrod are, the olny iprmoetnt tihng is taht the frist and lsat ltteer be at the rghit pclae. The rset can be a toatl mses and you can sitll raed it wouthit a porbelm. Tihs is bcuseae the huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe.

Cheers and thanks for posting such a great story!

the last half was kinda cringe. other than that thanks for the chapter

even though I like the other stories, I am glad he didn't. tell them about his. predictament ht off the bat I don't mind those stories rather it's just kind of irritating.

This story is cute

Thanks for the hard work love the story _

I like this story.

This was truly amazing to read. Thank you so much for sharing it. I especially love how controlled the power ups were. Too many times writers just seem to out of their way to overpower the characters and it just gets unrealistic and utterly BORING! But you kept everything well balanced with the characters and the story beautifully!

Fantabulous story! It was SO MUCH FUN to read! XD
Thanks for the great time!
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Where did you pop up Gai sensei

Incredible.

I am LOVING this story WAY too much to be HEALTHY! x'D

It would be cool if Naruto reacted like he just came back from a war just like Shikamaru

Good story

Ever heard of a comma? Holy fuck.

Imagine thinking taking the time to not look like an illiterate retard is a bad thing. You write fanfiction, you can't use the "I have a life" excuse.