Reviews for Toxicity
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2019
Love this!
ilanit.harary chapter 1 . 8/3/2018
go, Jimmy!
siobhan.22 chapter 1 . 7/31/2018
Great story
Bohogal1998 chapter 1 . 3/18/2018
Not sure if you were bashing Abby or Mcgee here! Either way I'm not a fan of Character bashing!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2018
Yeah!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
Wish someone would say this in the show lol.
Saissa chapter 1 . 9/15/2017
Great Abby bashing!
KajsaLena chapter 1 . 7/4/2017
She most certainly does!
supreme dramon chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
YES! I do love Jimmy and Ducky giving Abby a much needed talking to because she is very immature.
EMReader81 chapter 1 . 12/31/2016
Stories where Abby is called out on her behavior really should be more prevalent. I use to adore her character so much but as the seasons went on and they gave her character no growth and backtracked her emotional maturity she just became gringe-worthy. Your last paragraph says it all, continued good luck and energy with your writing
Sarai chapter 1 . 6/11/2016
awesome!
Maddy chapter 1 . 3/16/2016
Love this story. Nice to see someone calling Baby out for her behavior and actually pointing out consequences!
TonysSilverFox chapter 1 . 2/2/2016
Oh, how true! Grow up, indeed. I can't believe they are STILL playing that card on the show! My God, thirteen seasons in and she's still doing pigtails and mini skirts? I have to say though, this last season, it has never looked more absurd. There were several times Miss Abby looked every one of her 47 years and the goth getup looked ridicules. I really miss the first season of the show, before Abby became a caricature of herself and she was reasonable and pretty cool, it just went downhill from there. I'm sorry to see MW leave the show, but maybe he identified that it was time. They have tried to change his character and I really like the way Ellie treats Tony with respect, but they are stuck in a rut. Oh, well, the only constant is change. Great story, as usual ;-)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2015
go palmer!
i always thought that was spoilt by gibbs a bit too much and someone really needs to tell her to grow up.
great one-shot
mari chapter 1 . 6/27/2015
WOW, just found this gem

Congratulations on nailing each and every character on this once good show

Gibbs, went from annoying team lead to a horseass in one season with the introduction of Ziva David the murder of one of his agent Kate Todd.
I do not care what people say she murdered Todd with her profile on the team!

McGee, just a annoying pissant who would never ever be an actual field agent! He was a promising character at the beginning but he allowed the women of this pull him down to point if he was a real man he would be embarrassed by the way they pull him by his "balls"

Ducky, yes l love his character but there are times I wonder about him but I DO LOVE him in this

Wow, Palmer, I will be the first say I do not like his character but in this you wrote him beautifully... excellent job ... too bad to show writers don't him like this

Vance, MIA... glad : I still miss Tom Morrow

David, bitch hated the character from the get go

Tony, I love him and wish he would just move on. I had hoped with NCIS LA or NCIS New Orleans. MW would get his own show.

Abby, just one question what in world happened to this character?

You wrote an excellent insight on these characters

Hope we see more one-shots from you
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