Reviews for Chocolate
Bluewarrior3 chapter 1 . 4/15
It was a really cute story, tho it would have been even cuter if hinata was there, the whole uzumaki family eating ice cream. I mean sakura and sarada being there wasn't really needed, but i guess you wanted to add more to the story? Anways it was cute.
AcidESP chapter 1 . 6/17/2019
Hinata's words are 100% true, no matter what it is, how it looks, or how it tastes, if it's a child's food, it's the best and most incredible food in the world, hahaha, Hima's rules, hahaha, greetings, congratulations, bye!
theGamabunta chapter 1 . 12/17/2018
I am literally drowning in fluff. This was a very sweet story. Thank you for writing it.
QueenDeadPool chapter 1 . 7/1/2018
This was very sweet.
MLLu chapter 1 . 2/21/2018
Absolutely amazing! You are really good at capturing the happiness of your characters. I sincerely mean it! This was really adorable. Furthermore, I fancy your writing style as well. So fluent and easy to follow and your plot was cleverly thought. Your ending in this one was good too, to have Naruto reflecting over the past and the present. It was nostalgic for sure.

REALLY amazing job. KUDOS!
Mee chapter 1 . 12/15/2017
Cute :)
OneAznDragon chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
Cute little story, I only just recently gotten into Himawari / Naruto interactions.

Thanks for the read,
~OneAznDragon
Tony Samuels chapter 1 . 9/14/2017
your one shots are so damn cute. you have knack for portraying the characters accurately and the dialogue is natural too. keep writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2017
SasuSaku has never been perfect, but at least it progressed naturally. But what Kishimoto did with Naruto... Well, let's just say that I think that sakura had a far better position at understanding Naruto than Hinata ever had. In fact, I don't think Hinata ever understood him. She just wanted his kid. NH is only likeable when accepting it as it is. Instead, most of the fandom deform it to something which is so unrelated to canon that it seems more like they're bashing the canon characters.
Sadly, it seems like Kishi gave in to this fandom, and twisted Naruto into something he should never have been. This newest manga only seems another insult to a long line of insane decisions. Naruto's progress as a character, as well as his conclusion, would've made far more sense if he had stayed away from NH. If Kishi had really planned NH from the start: Naruto shouldve had some meaningful moments with Hinata. Instead, we went from Naruto completely ignoring Hinata's feelings, to him have a kid with her. With zero development.
Not that I like NaruSaku any more than I do NaruHina, but I do think that it would've made more sense. The Last only served to prove my point in that contrast.
Imagination 3101 chapter 1 . 6/1/2017
Beautiful story. Loved it.
timmy1022 chapter 1 . 2/10/2017
I read these Himawari oneshots before reading Pareidolia and your other longer stories. I can't believe you're the same author! Actually I can, now that I think about it you have the same style. I think anyway. Human memory is pretty flawed. Anyway I can remember I have liked every story of yours!

Thank you for writing.
Kuropie chapter 1 . 10/5/2016
Thank you for this one-shot. It was well put together and I really like your writing style!
T-Aj71721291 chapter 1 . 9/24/2016
That was nice and adorable. I just love it!

Between us, I think that I need to write something about Kurama and Naruto after The Last.

Anyway, I was wondering why Naruto never use a clone and go to his family sometimes. I mean, he's the master of that jutsu in particular.
Vanitas Caelum chapter 1 . 9/13/2016
himawari is just tbe cutest... and again, your cover pic _
The Wind God of the Leaf chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
God damn the feels are so real in this. I freaking love it.
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