'Natsu' and 'Research' in the same sentence just doesn't feel right...

I think Natsu is being a selfish pompous ass. It’s like he doesn’t understand that not telling them isn’t going to change anything he should be telling them so that way when the day comes all of them are stronger all of them are ready. instead When Zeref does come they’re just gonna be canon fodder again how is that protecting your family? His logic of you don’t tell me your past so why should I tell you mine is completely and utterly ridiculous because what happened to him didn’t just happen to him it also affected everyone else by you know getting them killed. No I’m not saying I hate your writing I actually like the way you are writing his character you’re writing him as someone who thinks that only he can do this himself which is always a dumb notion to have but it’s a really bad quality that he has to overcome. In fact it’s a quality most heroes and protagonist have always thinking that they have to carry the weight of the world on their shoulders alone.

i haven't seen the mystogan idea but I love it wish more fanfics would include him

Hi, could you pm me on my account? I'd be interested in doing a story collab with you.

Absolutely incredible story so far! I really hope that you update it soon! I can't wait for the next chapter!

much better :3

Also, I'm really glad you decided to use Mystogan. He's one of the coolest characters that wasn't ruined by Mashima's bad writing (well, not as much as the others...). Too bad he's not going to stay Post-Edolas, if I'm to guess :/...

HOL' TF UP.
WHERE IS GRAY'S PANTS AND ERZA'S CAKE?!
FUCK LULLABY, I NEED ME SOME MAGIC KHAKI'S

Welp was hoping you let Lucy kidnapped and finally removed from the story she soo useless and dumb.

Rereading your story and this chapter made me reinforce the thought that you should change the main pairing of the story from only Natza to Natza and Natear, you worked them well, they have to become a couple they are very beautiful together I really hope that change really hope.

I am loving the story is very good the construction of love between Natsu and Erza and I was surprised by Mystogan and Lucy I want to see what it will be like when he has to go back to Edolas, but back to the main subject as much as I love stories that only have Natsu and Erza as a romantic couple in this story due to their interaction I think you should change the story from only NATZA to NATZA AND NATEAR because I found his relationship with Ultear to be so cool as it is his relationship with Erza he can have two mates in History would improve the story beyond that NATEAR is so obonit when Natza I really hope you change the story and add Natsu and Ultear as well as Natsu and Erza.

Nice update and I don't care what people say but i love how Natsu lost to Ikaruga, it shows to say that his not totally invisible and can lose some fights. So don't mind some people say about it not being good (e.g Gudako and 30Hek'Unnskipper)... Now for the pairing some people say that they want it pure Natza but to be totally honest Natsu has more chemistry as they call it with Ultear more than with Erza in this story. Just look at it they (I mean Natsu and Ultear) started off hating each other and now see how close they've become to the point were his words made her cry and this Ultear were talking about to see were mere words coming from him could make her cry is amazing to say least and it goes to say she deeply cares for him. So please I recommend not to make it a harem but to make it either a pure Natza or a pure Natear for i know both women wouldn't want to share him but I'll personally go for Natear.

I’m very glad to see you back guess all my years of patience really paid off and I believe that you should just make a Natza story ultear is just a uh “acquaintanceto put it in appropriate terms)with natsu at least to me anyway again I’m glad to see you back and I’ll look forward to the next one(as usual)

...the girl? Did I just miss when they checked on her?

Technically it's 9 years thanks to the seven year time skip.

Great to see this story is continuing, another great chapter. I’d recommend keeping the story Natza, one bc I’m biased and think Ezra is an amazing character plus the fact her and Natsu have the chemistry there especially early in the anime, but also bc it’s hard to write a polyamorous relationship and keep it grounded. I love Ultear as well and think that she’s an under appreciated character but I’d say stick with one or the other. Ezra doesn’t strike me as a woman who likes to share and neither does Ultear. Now I would love to see some love triangle drama there. Maybe it’s just me but I enjoy love interest conflict since real life isn’t all sunshine and rainbows where beautiful women just fall in your lap. In the end it’s your choice and I’ll keep reading either way, just thought I’d share my 2 cents on the matter. Good luck and looking forward to the next chapter!