Reviews for WGOK : What happened Next
raino9 chapter 1 . 1/14
Thank you, waiting for more.
Big Bad Beowulf chapter 50 . 1/9
Hello good author its been a whike catching up to this fic of yours. To I dont really mind it being short as long as it moves the story along. That being said, wow a lot happen and I love the call back of Keima's mom grilling to his dad about another girl hehehehe. Anyway I had to remind myself that there was ANOTHER girl who taken an interest of Keima besides the Goddess' hosts, and love it how each girl wants to make sure that when the goddess' are all said and done that he will still be round to be with them. I know I said it before but im loving this fic about our favorite Otomegane and cant wait for the next chapter.
Ps Happy late New years.
Ghost Man chapter 50 . 1/7
Well that was random P Good luck in the new year.
xellos540 chapter 50 . 12/25/2019
Hello, welcome back. Glad to see an update.

Lol, auntie. xD

Well, a cousin from Elsie's side isn't actually that far from the truth. :P

"excused herself to make some calls" xD

Lol, is Mavie a naughty girl? o.O

Level 5 loose soul? o.O

Poor Shiori...

Lol, Shiori speaking with Keima on the phone? That's going to be interesting. :D

Okay, as I said I'm glad you're back and despite it being short, a few thinkgs have happened. Rimyuel is as controversial and amusing as usual and the phone is definitely a possibility I'd like to expand upon. Who knows what the evil devils there are planning, including Lune. I somehow think this will include Kumamoto. The length of the chapter is okay (though longer would be fine too, depending on your free time to write), the problem is that the readers might not remember what was last time. My suggestion would be adding a 'previously on "What happened next"' section that could help us see what had happened so far (in general), with special care for the last chapter or two (in more detail).

I'm looking forward to more. Sorry about your busy schedule. I know how that feels. :(

Still, I hope you'll get to update more frequently.
MIKE202303 chapter 49 . 10/29/2019
Nice work I look forward to more
xellos540 chapter 49 . 10/7/2019
Welcome back, it's nice to see an update after so long.

It looks like the girls are resolving things and getting more comfortable around each other. Not sure what is really happening with Shiori though.

It's also interesting to see Keima saying "until you get bored of me you're my responsibility". That's kinda new... and intriguing.

I see Miharu is jealous and wary of Rimyuel. Not that I blame her. We'll see what'll be the result of that.

Did I get this right, Rimyuel we'll be staying at Keima's house? Wonder what Mari'd say to that.

Ryou is an idiot as usual.

And then there's still that thing Haqua was worried about, the enemies and stuff, right?

Anyway, this has been a slow chapter, but at least it calmed down and some stuff was resolved.

On the other hand, you should definitely use some text-checking (with grammarly for example) as there is some typos/erros in this chapter.

I hope too see another update of this story from you soon. I don't really mind you writing other stories as long as you still update this or those other stories will also be TWGOK.
Ghost Man chapter 49 . 10/7/2019
Feels like it's been forever. Welcome back.
tomfe59 chapter 49 . 10/6/2019
It is understood that you want to take a break, better for the fic, more new ideas, less writer blockages, more new fics.

I hope you keep updating this fic, I like to read it, and I want to know what will happen when the goddesses have all their power again.

If you're going to make another fic because you don't try a crossover, someone said Campione! x TWGOK?

I hope to hear more from you soon.
Lyoshiiro chapter 48 . 9/9/2019
Can't wait to read the next chapter. Whenever that is...
AmazingArchitect chapter 48 . 5/24/2019
Please update
Ghost Man chapter 48 . 9/28/2018
I thought Dokuro...oh yeah that's right. Not that part of the timeline.
Big Bad Beowolf chapter 48 . 9/20/2018
Hey me again, great chapter, have to seems like things are going to get complicated for the hosts at what Akari did, seriously balls move on her, and the answer to my question that makes sense and sh was an interesting character in the manga can wait to see more of this story continue
xellos540 chapter 48 . 9/17/2018
It's good to see another chapter of this. Congratulations on bringing it muuuuch earlier than your usual updates.

*sigh* Elsie is such a worry wart... then again, it looks like Haqua is hiding something mysterious and ominous after all.

Heh, both girls talking simultaneously was funny. :P

Man, Kanon's monologue is kinda deep. Nice character development. I really like this moment. Kanon thought she deserved him, thought she was the only one being conquered. Thought she had Keima. And then she saw Keima was making effort not only for her. She saw her conquest is done.

Well written, Author-san, well written. :)

And now Tsukiyo's confusing me xD... she has a point about Kanon not being able to see Keima everyday. It may be obvious, but you're portraying it in an interesting way.

It really feels like heartfelt conversation between those two and some misunderstandings get solved.

Okay, so Rimyuel's war declaration is still in the air with immediate conseqeunces yet... unless tht's the reason why Shiori's crying? Wait, Shiori's crying?! Why is Shiori crying!?

Like I said before, due to your updating schedule, chapters length and pacing, it's a little difficult to follow the plot... but this here chapter is actually really good. I can't say I remember all of them, but it's the best of the recent ones and quite possibly amongst the best chapters of this story. It flows well, has good development and plot progress. Even the length is not a problem.

I hope we'll get more chapters as good as this one.

P.S. I see the story cover image has changed. :)
Big Bad Beowolf chapter 47 . 9/11/2018
Hello good author new to reading this fic and i have to say... the summary and title piqued my interest, the story now has my attention, and so far im am loving seriously this a different take that i never thought of im a big fan of TEGOK and done the characters pretty decent, im curious out of all the girls keoma conquered why chose Nanaka, also nanaka as i seen her character in the manga seem to have a somewhat southern accent but dont see that here, either i love the interaction between her and yhe main cast, keep up the good work good author and cant wait to see another chapter
FrozenDeluxe chapter 47 . 9/8/2018
Ah, I might end up having to reread the whole fanfiction...
It's been so long since I was last hereDon't feel too bad about being busy! Life happens people get busy. It's understandable.
Of course, I'll still be waiting for that endingCheers to your future endeavors!
-FrozenDeluxe *.*
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