Honestly one of, if not the best fan fiction of nastsu being raised by acnologia or him being a dragon I love the fact that you have blended your own story elements and the fairy tail story so fluidly. Also, making natsu very powerful but having very enticing reasons, such as dragnification, mind-control or coming back from the dead!, why he may struggle in fights makes the story that much better.

Amazing as always keep up the great work. ;)

Your doing well! I still want to see END though!

I like where this is leading...more caracter building and many hates wendy for what she did but i still like her. Yes she made like an Giganormous mistake but even with her upbringing she is still a child and thus immature. I think natsu will come to see it that way when he has truly colled down.

I like that you are atleast trying to fix things that your readers are asking of you too and actually taking the time and trying to work their ideas as well. Not many writers do that and then some stories end up ruined and incomplete because they didn't solve the issues prior. I do have a 2 questions though and its if Natsu is at his peak for power. Because how his body degraded obviously youve thrown in that he shouldn't use magic like he used to till he heals but how far has he changed. Do his contracts with the black keys of sin still hold and can his body still create his other magics despite that he has curse running through him like tartaros. Another is why did the council instantly assume hes a spy for the dark guild but didn't act according to their hunch because im sure others can agree that if you think there's a spy in your midst you would confront them without a plan and power to act accordingly. For instance the council summoned him to their main headquarters in Era but didn't have the 10 Saint on standby incase of a fight and then they also just played by Natsus hand and let him go like it wasn't a big deal to begin with

Mard Geer: Where did you get that book?!
Natsu: why do you have a creepy book with my name on it?
Mard Geer: ...what

:)... couldn’t resist.

Great chapter, telling them that it was acnologia's doing was not a lie, and keeps fairy tail as a guild with complete deniability.

Your story is amazing thanks for this share this new chapter is truly awesome it was terrific, delicate, sweet!
I started to read this summer and so far it is really great! :3

I’m excited for END! Will he still be a fire demon? Or a chaos demon?

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It seems that things are truly becoming spicy now...

Im a bit sad that my favorite fanfic is coming to a close, but it will remain my fav fanfic till the end of time.

Although I enjoy how Natsu is maturing... I don’t expect him to forgive Wendy. You have to understand she didn’t just kill him, she risked the lives of all the people in Crocus.

Her decision and the Master’s decision to keep this secret from the others is very important to your story but you just throw it out into the wind.

The thing about your ‘fillers’ is that you skip through everything the readers wanted to know & feel. We wanted Natsu & his wives to become more harsh with Fairy Tail & maybe even abandon it & become independent mages. Then when Tartaros comes Natsu & his wives / children come and help the guild.

But your fic is kinda pathetic in explaining any of this. You don’t show us either Ultear or Mira’s reaction to the guild’s betrayal. I assume Mira & Ultear just forgive them like always and no bad blood. Who cares if there husband dies right? Funny..

This is my favorite Fairy Tail fic behind the story that Gildarts took Natsu on his 3 year training trip. It was the #1 rated fic on Fanfic for fairy tail under the Rated M section but the author removed it for some reason.

The point is even though this is my favorite fic, i feel that the quality & heart for this story just isn’t there anymore and it feels rushed. Like if your rushing to end it already. Each chapter feels like a snippet & that’s not how a story should be told.

Good luck in the future but i’m out :(

P.S
- It’s sad cause i loved this fic so much, but it feels like someone else is writing it rn

Love that you've kept going with this story! I'm happy to hear that you plan to fix old mistakes. Ive been here since you first started writing this story and I've loved the majority of it. There were places where I feel you could have given more information on for instance the black keys that Natsu currently possesses and their purpose as well as what made him adopt the kids and the time gap from tenrou. Just for some ideas