This is such an intresting story to read! I love how Sabo is realistically jealous but also not just giving up, gotta keep up with the bros. I'm surprised how much Lami is involved and makes me sad anytime she talks about the voice and I'm crying cuz Law is out there thinking she's dead. I also love how goofy a big brother Haruta is. Luffy is smart about Teach, stay awayyyyy, get everyone else to stay awayyyy, warn the world Luffy. I'm glad Ace is finally becoming happy. Just so many things, and mom Marco is great, and I hope Thatch doesn't die...anyway I love the story

OHMYGAD! WAS THAT SHANKS AND ZEFF!?

Please update soon! I really love this story! I love how all the crew interacts with the kids and how Ace and Sabo both have mentors within the crew, Lami, and Haruta too. And I know I said this but please have Garp catch the kids if you plan on it! I love it when he catches them when they're with the Whitebeards!

Hey! Great story so far! I really love it and hope that you update soon! I wonder if Sengoku will ever tell Garp where his Grandsons are? I'd love to see them interact. And I'm glad he's turning a blind eye to Lami's presence with the Whitebeards at the moment.

It feels shameful to say, but man do I get second hand embarrassment from how obvious Bay is when she's trying to be 'one of the guys'. I get it she's had to fight for any semblance of recognition she gets from the crew and captain himself. But somehow it feels overly obvious when it comes to her dialogue. Sometimes it is natural with characterization, others it's not. In her instance, she screams 'try-hard'.

I loved it. I couldn’t stop reading, since chapter 1. It’s an absolutely amazing story and i can’t wait to read the next chapter :)

I've said it before, and I'll say it again: Luffy is a TROOPER, no matter the age.

He took Bluejam's torture like a champ, the same way he did with Porchemy and those spiked gloves. Aw, but when he refused to cry, Thatch thought he was a slave like Koala was! That breaks my heart, but it's also pretty cute.

I'm glad our little boy was rescued early on though. Only six chapters of uncertainty before Luffy was safe. Seriously, he's too cute to suffer! I also loved how Thatch regretted not making Bluejam suffer more when he learned the reason WHY Luffy had swallowed so much seawater. But that low-life deserved nothing more than to be snuffed out quickly like the trash he was.

*bouquet of happy flowers* I love this story so much. I’m sorry things have been hard on you, hope these flowers help.

I look forward to seeing how Lami grows stronger with the boys.

I'm so happy that you've kept writing! This is amazing and everything I wanted. I hope you're having a great time writing it as well and thank you!

Ahhh this story is so freaking good! I love how you've developed the relationships between ASL and the Whitebeards, especially between them and the original three and Whitebeard. I love how you revealed Ace's dad to the crew and how they all called out for him and made it clear they love him - that part made me tear up. I love how the relationships with Haruta and Lami have grown, they're all so cute together! This story is amazing and I'm so glad I found it! Thank you so much for sharing this with us and be sure to stay safe and take care, we'll all be here however long it takes. Thank you!

Hello!
I think you have a small blunder here. Ace hung Luffy's hat around his neck. Before jumping into the water, it is not mentioned that he took it off, but I decided that it was meant. But after Sabo sees a hat on Ace's neck. I don’t think that taking his brother out of the water, Ace first pulled the hat back, which means he did not take it off at all. But swim in a straw hat? She will fall apart.

I'm in so much angst with all that is happening, I really need it to stop and get better. At least they met Dragon and he's going to help, just please let they find Luffy.

This is an awful situation.

Oh please don’t take another 2 years to update this wonderful story! This is one of the best One Piece fanfic I have ever read so please update soon! I’m dying to know what happens next!

Hi!
Just finished reading everything and seriously it's awesome. I'll be happy to read the next chapters!
Oh and will Koala meet Namur again? Or maybe join the crew? And will Lami meet Law again? (I did not miss what you said about her jewelry ;p)

Have a nice day!
Soltis48
P.S. Sorry, English is my second language.