You did a wonderful job explaining why Gohan wears glasses. It was definitely something that I was wondering about. Great idea and start for a sequel.

Hi I’ve read through this fic too in a very short time! Just like the first one I’m loving this too and the direction your taking it :) one of my fav reads definitely please update soon :D

Sweet work on the chapter always makes me smile seeing a new one when it gets updated.

Awesome bardock is coming ho,e XD

Aw yeah. Bardock's ready to kick some bubblegum and chew ass, and he's all out of ass! Wait...

I hope you’re not implying that Gohan fights Hit with the Z sword because weapons are illegal in this tournament. And cool for Gohan but too bad for kaiokens dramatic return

Another great chapter! loving the interactions between grandpa Gohan and Bardock. makes you question how Bardock would have been raising Goku. now j can't wait to see what happens next!

...oh, I guess the chapter was reworked then. Looks good!

Welcome back! Thank you so much for continuing this amazing story!

Never enough of Bardock abusing children. Glad you updated, it love the way you portraited Bardock and the family dinamics. For me you can kill Bardock every chapter if that is what we will get.

What if in next fight he will get both arms and legs amputed then killed?

Lol "Just in case."

Enjoyed ;)

...you know what, this story just took a steep curve upwards! I can see the increased skill of the author when compared to earlier chapters.

Great chapter! I absolutely love this story due to the way you write the characters and their interactions. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Poor Goku! Lmaoooo

Glad to see this lovely series continue once morethis chapter was certainly interesting, the I love the conflicting personalities between Gohan and Bardock here. curious what will happen with the poor time traveler though