Keep it up can’t wait for more

The last chapter can be considered as some kind of ending for the fic but I wish you ended it completely.

If you don't know what to do consider that in Ace's novel his bounties where higher than usual because the government knew or were suspicious about his heritage. There are also changes that can be made, consequences of Luffy and Ace changing things that motivate characters to act.

Blackbeard's premature death could be one of them. He has had to have some kind of allies. Luffy defeating cp9 without declaring war to eines loby could be other. Bon chan going to impel down alone is another thing too. The revolutionary army must have started to get suspicious about Luffy. Sabo is still a mistery on this fic and I don't know if he died on this or something bad af happened to him and luffy won't say anything not even to his brother.

The crew must also have started to think about Luffy and why does he know that much. The nightmares, Luffy's hints and predictions, the little of his past they know and the way he behaves could make them discover things. Luffy could end up telling them he is from another reality.

Also, canonically Luffy has PTSD, after all the shit he has seen do you really believe he won't have an episode? I don't think so. Uwu.

Please keep writing it if you can because it's a blessing and I really like it.

amazing story

found this the other day and i was like - oh, i really liked this fic when i was a preteen! let's try it now! and honeestly, i expected it to be pretty bad, because most of the things preteen-me liked weren't very good but wow was i wrong. i really loved this! thanks for writing, even if you don't continue!

Rest In Peace, great work

I love the Skypiea Arc in the anime, but in fan fiction it’s the most boring arc in the world. Like the lore and shells and sky islands are absolutely amazing and awesome things but reading it? Uuuugggh

I love the fact that Nami appeared in roughly the same way as she did in canon. She still needed a ton of money but instead of paying off Arlong, it was to find Luffy and that makes me happy.

Zoro looking after Luffy as well!

Alright, YESSSS!

Honestly I just hope to see the ASL Pirates again in canon land. And I really hope that when we meet them, they are New World level. Even if it’s only just “we entered and survived the new world” I wanna see em!

Just wanna say your fic is amazing describing the relationships Luffy has w/ his crew mates esp after I’ve read this again. and generally, ur writing is pretty good so fuck the anon guest commenter underneath me, they’re being a dick and awfully rude for no particular reason over an old ass fanfic.

That u think the bonds is even reasonably close to "acelu" just shows how shallow you understand even basic relationships.

Do you Fuck your dad? I bet you masturbate to it.

Plz update! When I saw it was last updated in 2017 I almost lost hope, but your account was online recently so I hoped again! Please don’t abandon this fan-fiction. My reason is

1: This fic is the best time-travel fic ever, especially when there is Ace in it. They understand and miss each other dearly to the point that, even you can’t bear to see the look on their eyes without wanting to shed a tear.
2: It explain correctly and detailed in what are the traumatic events that have occurred and the consequences.
3: The author didn’t take ‘Ace’s death’ and ‘Luffy’s longing’ lightly, she/he really put all what really would happen logically or even in OP universe.
4: Nami, that’s the most reaction I’ve expected as what Oda would do (if he were to made this fic) when Luffy recklessly left traces of him defeating Arlong. Her personality and dream would change, that’s why as people said, “Slightest move change the future.”

I’m hoping for more! There’s more reasons of why I love this ver much, but I’ll leave that to my heart as a fan-girl. God bless you author! Stay safe!

I really, really loved this fic! Everything; Ace and Luffy's relationship, the ASL crew, Luffy's relationship with the other Strawhats, Ace's relationship with the Whitebeard pirates, how you show how things are different this time around but how what needs to happen still does; I just love everything about this! I know it has been a long time since you updated this story, but I really hope you continue it!

Hello!
Sorry for all the possible errors, I don’t know English, I read and write through a translator.
I read a lot of one piece stories about time travel, but yours stands out. Not only because Luffy and Ace returned to the past, but also because you don’t retell the manga / anime with minor changes. You know what is important for the story, and what can do with one or two paragraphs (the Skypiea arch does not cost two or three chapters, which are usually allocated to it). I also do not see the point in a detailed description of the fighting, especially when many cannot do it right.
Your story ... I don’t know how to express it, but reading it, I feel that Luffy and Ace will shake the world one day as it should. I like that feeling.
And I like your Nami. I hate Nami in canon. She annoys me from the first appearance and still, but yours Nami ... I can’t say that this is the other Nami, she can feel the spirit of Nami’s canon, it’s just that your Nami has a more pleasant character. And I do not consider this an OOC, because no one knows what Nami would be if she had freed herself from Arlong earlier.
Speaking of which. Chapter 9 says that Luffy saved Nami three years ago, but in chapter 10, Robin recalls that she met Luffy five years ago. And the village of Nami Luffy saved before meeting with Robin.
Oh, and again! I wonder what reaction Johnson and Samson had when the Ace and Luffy awards came out.
Like everything ... I hope one day a new chapter appears, but for now, thanks for those that are.

Rereading this was a ride. Does Luffy know Sabo's alive? And lmao guess Luffy can't declare war on the world govt when there'd be no witnesses. Ehhh he's gonna punch a celestial dragon anyway

It’s kinda funny how everyone is uncomfortable about Ace and Luffy’s affection! In any case, I wonder if it will be Ace next time in need of comfort since Luffy had the last time they met. Although, I wonder how they are going to meet without Marineford bringing them together...thank you for this story!