Reviews for Revelations: Paradise Acquired
TheDisturbedDragon chapter 7 . 8/4
So at first I thought this was a great premise. I still do, in fact. But you're wasting its potential.
It's gone from Satan replacing Rin and thus throwing everything off to a simple retelling of the story. Why on Earth would Satan play along with Mephisto and Yukio, let alone go to an exorcist school? He's demonstrated several times in canon that he doesn't give two shits for humans, so why is he bothering to be "Rin" with nothing in it for him? Canon-Satan would more likely "protect Yukio" like he promised Yuri by kidnapping him into Gehenna, giving him a minor castle somewhere, and telling other demons he's off limits, then not caring what he does. At this point it's just Rin with a lot of flashbacks. No characterization change, no alterations from canon, no characters realizing it's Satan and not Rin, and following the stations of canon.
I hope your rewrite changes this, but until then I have to stop reading. It had a lot of potential, and I hope you can make changes to bring that potential out.
Animegirl257 chapter 13 . 7/19
Alright, time to do the rest :D
gvdub chapter 13 . 7/18
Fuck I love this story
EndlessHax chapter 13 . 7/6
! i’m incredibly surprised! I was just going through my old reviews and happened to see this. Not too sure why I didn’t get a notification about the update, though, I admit, I could’ve just not followed. Either way, I’m glad to see you back! Good luck with your writing :D
Tustar chapter 1 . 5/7
hi, I just read the first chapter, and I have a question.
can I keep reading, or do you reccomend waiting for the next rewritten chapter?
DannyGear chapter 1 . 4/1
I remember reading this almost 4 years ago. It's amazing to see it updated even if just for a rewrite. I would love to see literally anything more !
Spades231 chapter 13 . 3/30
Well I’m all caught up with the story and I gotta say I love it. Wonderful stuff here.
808Joker808 chapter 1 . 3/30
Good start. Looking forward to this rewrite.
BigRig2.0 chapter 2 . 3/21
nope
ElectraX12 chapter 1 . 3/18
loved this chapter so much
Mochimaddness chapter 13 . 3/15
yay!
Hylyssa chapter 1 . 3/13
Man that was a fantastic rewrite for chapter 1, I'm looking forward to the next one already!
Thanks for not abandoning this story, and I hope you have a fantastic weekend!
YokaiAngel chapter 13 . 3/13
CONGRATS!
DannyGear chapter 13 . 3/13
I remember reading this almost 3 or 4 years ago, it was so good that I just couldn't forget it, it's an amazing experience to get an update even something like this after all this time
Krystall Klear chapter 1 . 3/13
My favourite blue exorcist fanfiction? updated? WOW! boy am i glad to see this lovely little gem again! Nice to see the cool little tweaks in the new first chapter. Amazing! Im interested as to how this rewrite will go :3 Lovely work as always.
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