Reviews for Connections
Guest chapter 32 . 7/16
Amazing chapter as always! I do hope another girl manages to see Keila with the lipstick. Imagine the misunderstandings lol. Keep going and looking forward for the next one!
Guest chapter 32 . 7/16
Hello good author, wow what a chapter, lots of things are happening to out god of conquest but at lets he looks Fabulous in red lipstick, good thing it wasnt permanent. About the pending deadlines I say you keep them in the end just shows what he needs to keep as important dates. As always I'm enjoying this fic so much as well as its take on the series, please keep up the good work.
NepShrimpz chapter 32 . 7/13
Wew Kanon. I am really getting scared of her (and for her xD).

Also Chihro just had a ''Daga Oona da!'' moment xD
sasukesdoom chapter 32 . 7/13
KANOOOOON! LMAO she's the best. great chapter, thanks for updating!
Guest chapter 32 . 7/13
Keep the deadlines. This story is a lot to keep track of, by the way massive props to you for keeping everything together so seamlessly, and having little notes like that helps in keeping some organization. It also makes the story feel a bit more “game-like” which is very fitting considering our main character. All in all nice chapter and I’m excited for the big day on Saturday! Good luck in your usual life, 2020 has been a nightmare this fic helps me push through. Seriously I feel even Keima would be pushed to his limits with this shit.
nobodyreallyimportant chapter 32 . 7/12
The story rating is fine as is, I think. It all really depends on how far Kanon decides to take things.

Anyway, another excellent chapter. Good luck with the job hunt, and good taste in Danganronpa.
DarkDrawerJ chapter 32 . 7/12
1st of all, I just want to say, what a coincidence because I was just rereading this story for the 3rd time! It truly makes me love the characters of The World God Only Knows. All of these chapters give me warm feelings when I think about how you've handled each character and how their feelings for Keima develop. I truly don't know how this'll end because all the girls vying for Keima's affection has a good shot imo (Harem route confirmed?!) You truly are going to make me cry next chapter (Out of happiness for Shiori's growth and the expression of her feelings). Shiori is my favorite girl and the way you've handled her is just so good! My heart is going to explode XD! I've liked every girl and their connections (haha) to Keima. Every chapter you bring a smile to my face. The ANs don't bother me and the rating can change (I'm kind of glad it'll never get too explicit. The level of feelings and wholesomeness rocks!). You (and Xellos) truly help me love KamiNomi more and more!
Grz chapter 32 . 7/12
I think the pending deadlines works fine, given the complexity of the story it helps keep track current plot threads.

Personally I think it helps build tension/anticipation for the next chapter like a cliffhanger, which can feel like the disrupt the flow of a scene.

Good job, I hope things get better for you IRL going forward.
Soulbow109 chapter 32 . 7/12
Nice to see an update. Got to say, Kanon really comes off as dangerous doesn't she? The idea you got with Chihiro and Yui sounds hilarious and I look forward to seeing more. Sumire's new bowl is certainly creative lol.

Not sure about the rating, but I guess content like what is shown in 28-9 can be seen as M.
DELETEDFOREVERCENTURY chapter 32 . 7/12
Good work Cielesia, you've done a wonderful job of illustrating Keima and his insane juggling act as always
Keep it up!
xellos540 chapter 32 . 7/12
Hello, again. :)

Great to see you're posting another chapter of this story.

So, it's Kusunoki taking out the delinquent shougi club trash... and in return Keima... can't go to Uemoto's? Kusunoki's not going to take that well (not to mention Sumire's and Asami's screentime :P).

Wait, so Uemoto's today? Sounds interesting. :)

Oh, it's Tenri... or the other Tenri. What's up with that? Oh, so it's officially "Diana" now? Or do I don't remember something.

Lol, recruiting a clearly jealous Tenri... that will definitely not end well...

...ok... Tenri joins by herself... I'm scared now.

Ok, Tenri wants to be walked after school? That's literally an after-school event... Keima will realize she's after him, right? Right?

Lol, Kanon wants a picture? Btw. I reallly feel bad for Keima now. He seems so unfairly tossed around by life at this point.

Kanon sent a picture back...

Damn...

Just damn...

This is risque stuff. I mean, I don't mind, I love it actually... but damn...

A quiz though. Name one girl in your story who is after Keima and isn't showing signs of yandere. :P

Oh, it's Shiori's time now!

Shiori's going to see the meet right? Wonder how much she will spill to Fujidera?

"There's a lot of competition", well even assuming half the girls are going for the friendship route, I'm certain Shiori doesn't know about all of her rivals.

So, Shiori and Fujidera weren't that close?

And it's Chihiro now!

So Chihiro practices for hours everyday? A bit unexpected, but not unwelcome.

Lol, Chihiro working at Aoyama's? That's kinda accidental, but still: that connection net is getting more and more interesting.

Okay, I understand Keima is tired and maybe even wary of girls, but could answer nicer, Chihiro working at Aoyama's could save his wallet. Chihiro's wallet and help Aoyamas.

Lol, a boss music xD.

Oh, so Mio recognizes Chihiro?

Heiress Mio. Part-time store clerk Mio. Nice. :P

Ooook... so Mio deicded Chihiro just gets the job? So it's Mio's bakery not her mother's. :P

Wait, did Yui arrive? Are we looking into the band expanding?

Lol, Chihiro thinks male Yui is a hot guy? That's the weirdest connection out there. xD And what's up with Yui's shoulders? xD

Really hope Keima will make Chihiro realize it's a girl soon...

"Reality rolling the dice", "looking back at the previous save"... you use so nice expressions at times.

Keima in contacts... I think this will get Kusunoki more into him. xD

Okay, so we see again Sumire... and Asami. I'm glad for that of course... but there are also two Mai-High girl customers... I wonder if it's anyone we know...

Lol, is it Yoshino Ikumi now? She's in Mai-High here?

Hmm... Keima's looking at Asami's backside? :P

Lol, nice raman thing. But no name? I'd call it Scarlet Smooch. :P

Yeah, I'm safe, I think, thank you for asking, I hope you're staying safe too.

It was a very interesting chapter and I'm glad you back. Looking forward to what happens in the future. :)

I totally don't mind the pending deadlines thing, I love it actually, just like the author's notes.

As for the rating... hard to say to be honest. What Kanon did last time was brave and surprising, but still you portrayed it subtly. This here was more explicit. I personally don't have a problem with M rating, I'd be able to find and read the story anyway. It should be true for your exisitng readers, as they probably get updates from emails. NEw readers might not be able to find the story, as M rating is hidden by default. It's a tough decision. :(

P.S. Kanon's CG thing gave me a HoneyPop vibe, if you know what I mean. :P

P.P.S. Not sure about the title... aside from Chihiro misunderstanding Yui's gender and maybe Ikumi-Asami confusion is there any more misunderstanding here?
ajpa chapter 32 . 7/12
Shit man just do whatever is best for u. All i want is the harem ending but ima guess tht im not getting it here

Still gonna keep reading though

Perhaps u can do multiple endings? Including a harem one.
R-king 93 chapter 32 . 7/12
Awesome chapter
PandaSomething chapter 32 . 7/12
Yay your back. Also even if this is a semi-filler chapter its really, really enjoyable.
DPSS chapter 32 . 7/12
The rating is fine as long as it doesn't get explicit. Although that does raise the question of how Keima is gonna dodge the Kanon flags without completely breaking her in the process. He has simply made her confidence way too intrinsicaly connected with him for a clean break to be possible.
And Keima's schedule becomes more and more full. Poor guy is gonna get overwhelmed at this rate.
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