You should do option A really good story like the way it is going wouldn't change a thing

That was very satisfying to read

Seems okay. The only major issue I have are with grammar and punctuation, especially seeing how there's supposed to be a comma or a period to where there's not. It breaks the flow and immersion of reading, to be honest.

La b quisiera para adoptarlo pero sigue amigo me gusta tus caps

Your work isn't bad and I like what you've done with Naruto and really like what you've with the Dxd characters but absolutely all of Naruto's peerage and the other additional characters are dead weight. I know why you added them but you pretty much just dumped them into the story instead of actually building them up. Instead you relied on the weight of their origin stories weight while completely failing to bring out the personalities that made them so powerful in the first place. If you do ever start working on this again I'd rather see all of them redone or just removed.

Man gotta hate people when they ruin other peoples days.. and not just the author but everyone that like the story. Like seriously man? U gotta ruin it for the rest of us cuz u a bitter person and didn't like the story?
Thanks to whoever did that. ur the very best *lvls up to 100 sarcasm*
For real author, don't take their shit just ignore them. Great story man.

It was decent so far but since this was the first it may be better to just redo.
I hope you could do a naruto/iron ladies fanfic?

Honestly even though it is 2 years ago honestly I think option a or c are the best since its such a good story thanks

One teeny tiny itty bitty little question I have for you; how do they know what a dragon smells like if it only permeates from people like Issei and his counterpart?

F FOR THIS HISTORY! :C

it kinda got ruined with all the rias bashing and giving her to issei rather than naruto

Why is Grayfia being the Maou such a bad thing you'd think naruto would no problem with it since they like each other...?

Naruto should die as a Naruto fan i normaly would be on his side but this goes against everything the real naruto stands for so i think its only right to hate him don't you think? Imagine if Kurama saw him act like this...

I personally loved the concept. I see no reason for you not to rewrite one of your first creations and taking your experience in writing to turn it into a masterpiece. Somthing I would love to see. Keep up the good work and hope to see more of your work in the future.

Woo! Damn! I liked this chapter. It was rather good, and I love that Naruto has Akame and Esdeath in his peerage. That's fucking awesome! XD
I also liked the ending of this chapter. I'm hoping we'll get to see the Lemon with Naruto and Serafall next chapter but I doubt we will... Why must you do this to me~! ;-;
Anyways though, good chapter. I'm liking what I've seen so far. Keep up the good work!

P.s. Also, you seem to have a bit of a problem when it comes to structuring your sentences, don't you? I might be willing to help correct all of that for you, but I'm not entirely sure if I want to yet. Although, I would be free some time next month since I'll be quitting my job for a while. Your chapters, after all, are not too long. So, it'd be rather easy to correct them quickly. You could PM me if you want to work something out though.