| Reviews for Sweet and Sour |
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   toothpastewasabisause chapter 9 . 8/29/2019 I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! |
| kawaiihinahime08 chapter 9 . 3/23/2019 hey author san, u cant leave us this kind of cliffhanger, its been ages already, we need update, plssss |
| shadow-hunter104 chapter 9 . 8/30/2018 You're killing us with this cliffhanger. Are you planning on updating this story? |
| Rlryn chapter 9 . 5/31/2018 OMG i love your story soo sooooooo much!its sweet and lemony at the same time..finally naruto hinata sweet lemony au story..I always looking for a story like this and when i found your story and read the 1st chapter i was like HELL YEAAAHHH FINALLYYYY SOMEONE FELT THE SAME AS I AM AND MAKE IT TRUE!OMG thank you so much for writing this..i hope you will continue soon u cant wait! |
| Usagi Hina chapter 1 . 2/16/2018 He is definitely into her (literally but also figuratively) |
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/11/2018 Please please please update to finish ! This is one of the greatest fanfics I have ever read! Honestly the last chapter is killing me...WE NEED TO KNOW WHAT IS TO COME! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/23/2017 Bruuuh dont leave us hanging Please continue️Ooh and im an ARMY too i love them all u cant really choose from the seven of them |
| ItsOnlyLuna chapter 1 . 6/18/2017 no don't make threesome |
| KuronoDono12 chapter 7 . 5/30/2017 You know after reading this chapter I kind of want to see at least one threesome between Naruto, Hinata, and Meiko. |
| VladImpaler chapter 8 . 4/16/2017 I love this story so been a hole year sints you last updated,please don't leave your fans 9 is a good clif hanger but I am tiered of hanging. |
| Koole1234 chapter 9 . 1/17/2017 i love this story i hope you can update this or ill take it off your hands |
| VictorianFrog chapter 9 . 11/22/2016 ohhh. I hope you'll get to continue this story. I like it... uhm... wait... I think I'm starting to love it if it isn't even love that I'm feeling for this story. hahahaha! I'll be waiting for the next one! |
| SalDalia chapter 9 . 11/10/2016 I wanted to stopped reading after the lemon or more like the really bad word porn. I cringed reading it. How is getting slapped in the face with a penis in your mouth even remotely passionate or a cum covered face a thing of beauty? Would Hinata really risk having sex in public with her family background? Having been caught once before doing less serious things I would assume they would be more careful. There is little to no character development. Hinata should have rejected Naruto after the Tei incident so that Naruto could prove his true feelings. Instead you make her wait an hour on him like a love sick puppy have her cook him a meal and then have sex. She is like the ultimate Mary Sue. The scene with her parents did not make sense to me. She wants to treated like an adult but cries as a first resort when she does not get her way. |
| SalDalia chapter 7 . 11/10/2016 I like the story so far. I was a bit disappointed that you'd used the damsel in distress trope in the previous chapter. A love triangle would have been a more interesting read. You may want to revise the lemon in this chapter |
| SalDalia chapter 4 . 11/10/2016 The plot thickens. I am enjoying this very much. |
