This story is fairly old now, but man the writing is really bad.

On what planet is it believable that a pair of parents will straight up forget they have a second child? A twin to the one they do "remember" at that. Either they have to be some of the most retarded people on the planet, or there's some coming (weak as hell) justification like they were magically manipulated to "forget" him. Or you're just an idiot and a shit writer.

Then you have some random guy somehow key in on a child using mind magic (without a wand) because his brother "taught him how to identify wizards". Which is a bullshit statement because Harry is a kid and doesn't use a wand, and he was manipulating minds. None of that would have had any outward visual cue to set of this assassin guy.

You also have Harry referring to people as "humans" like some fuck nugget who thinks he's edgy and better than other people, or someone who is also a human. But he is a human. And a child.

The problem with people like you is that when you write this dumb as fuck "neglected wrong BWL" stories is that none of you seem to have any idea how real people work. You go to cartoonishly exaggerated levels of neglect and abuse that simply makes zero sense. Hell, it would be more realistic if Harry were forced to do /everything/ with his twin because "of course you want to do this, you're twins" and have the (pointless, unnecessary, uninteresting) neglect manifest that way. Ignoring his specific, individual needs and desires because they assume he'd want to do everything his brother wants to do. Instead you go full-retard (which you are never meant to do, it is verboten) and have his parents just straight up "forget" he exists at all, and somehow /everyone/ else ALSO forgets he exists. Apparently, Harry is a ghost and no one remembers he ever existed at all, seeing as a house full of guests also seem to forget that James and Lily had another son for a whole year before he mysteriously stopped existing.

Damn That was a wonderful court hearing. And I just remember, What the F*** happened to Sirius or Lupin, I would already thought they would be around even before the third year.

Oh well. Still wonderful chapter.

Yes the the snake (is Samal his Familiar?) is the reason he was sent to Slytherin. LOL. I like the enitre build up of Harry life as a neglected child turned Assassin, force to go to Hogwarts.

The end of the chapter was confusing, and not in a good or interesting way,it feels like the logic is being abandoned and forgotten like little Harry. And i do hope in later chapters we will see WHY was Harry forgotten in the first place.

A very fun story, and a very interesting way of condensing about four moves and 7 books. I love Harry's interaction with Rose, highlight of the story for me. Thank you for writing it's very much so appreciated.

I loved this story so much! Are you ever going to post a sequel? I know people hate it when he has an unrealistic amount of power but I love it. Especially when he goes through shit to get it. I hate the character having to go through shit but I like that they didn’t just get power from nothing.

-I'm not going to Howgwarts!

-Harry, there is a magical contract, so you must go!

-Oh... ok then.

...WTF?

Great story!

foda

This is so bad

Why the fuck do authors who have harry doing wandless magic make him teach other people for fanfics sake. Fuck that shit. Thank you

Daphne was awesome in this story - so very disappointed she didn’t end up with Harry in the end.

I love this story and hope you make a new one

Harry didnt want to use magic in combat so that the fight will be a challenge and also to not reveal his ability but after that, he healed them! Very subtle their mate, so much for hiding

good