Reviews for Remnants of Desires
Guest chapter 22 . 12/17/2019
OC x Blake wildcat
littleboyblack17 chapter 40 . 11/13/2019
Fucking awesome
JBL0104 chapter 1 . 9/27/2019
The story is awesome but you forgot one important detail... Boxers.
J the Abarekiller chapter 39 . 3/31/2019
(for chapter 40) Jeez that review was way too long, Sorry about that, I'll try to keep my reviews shorter next time
J the Abarekiller chapter 40 . 3/31/2019
ok, so after some... things happened a couple years ago involving me and a certain Amazonian fanfic of yours, I have been a bit neglected to review your content. Back when I made my rather overreactive negative comment on Wild Omega, I wasn't really in any mood to really to read most of your content. It wasn't until recently that I became somewhat of a modest fan of the series RWBY that I wanted to read any kind of Kamen Rider crossover with it. I searched far and wide for one, but none of them really clicked for me. Until I came across this one. I saw it was 40 chapters, I saw it was completed and I said to myself, 'sure why not'. After finally finishing it just recently, what are my thoughts? well let's get into that.

First I'll go over the things that I liked, and frankly there is allot that I like. little spoiler, the negative portion of this will mostly be minor nit picks and only a couple of major problem, just a little heads up.

I really like the character interactions, relationships and development. I really liked how characters interacted with each other and how Enrique interacts with them, and I like seeing them bounce off each other. This one of the reasons why I started to fall in love with the show in the first place. Enrique makes it all the better as he's not afraid to call some people out on their bullshit. Anhk as well, you really nailed his character down to a T. As well as the other Greeed. Uva is his usual angry self, Mezool being the elegant type girl Greeed who is also bossy, Gamel is his childish and strong but having his deep caring nature for Mezool, and Kazari is the scheming bastard as always, for better or for worse but ill save that for later. I also really like the relationships he shares with the other characters like seeing Ruby as a near spitting image of his sister, calling out Weiss on her bullshit, as well as being there for people when they need him, and as the story went on I actually believed these characters were friends and wanted to see them work things out. I also really liked the romance between Enrique. Not only because I just like romances and Blake as a character but it also actually grows in a more organic way and they don't immediately get together. It's not love at first sight it's actually them at certain points finding out their attracted to one another and it makes it all the more satisfying when they do get together. and when they do get together it's pretty cute and sweet. They support each other, one comforts the other when they need to, and they're really committed to being with one another. Heck I even liked how Anhk was given more development and having a nice relationship with Sara and showing his past with the blind girl. I was also actually kinda saddened when Gamel and Mezool were 'killed'. It was just pretty heart wrenching seeing Gamel being saddened over her supposed death and even Ruby feeling bad for the poor guy. Another thing I liked were some of the fights, especially Enrique vs Adam. And when he cuts off Adams arm and says that badass line, "An eye for eye, or in this case, an arm for an arm." that just immediately made me love the character more. I especially like it when he fought Cinder and HE'S the one who scars her eyes as if wanting payback for her trying to get him to join her side.

Now we get to the stuff that I didn't like. First some of the more nit picky stuff. There are some spelling and grammar errors but thats to be expected. Some of plot points I thought were kinda rushed. Like Enrique turning into a Greeed could've had been focussed on more but instead it's just kinda done and over with. Tajador should've gotten more time to shine. TaJaDor is my favorite form and it was just kinda shafted to the side a not used as much. I also think there should've been more time spent on Enrique going Berserk in the PuToTyRa combo, I was always a fan of when the main hero would go Berserk and attack his friends while they desperately try to stop him and try to get him to calm down. I just think there should've been more chapters that focus on that. I also didn't like how things were kinda skimmed over like Yang getting saved by Raven from Neo, I think there should've been more focus on that like having Yang say that Neo beat her and someone had to save her and it was the chick in the mask and Enrique would remember that she attacked him while he was still recovering in the hospital. Yang and Anhk constantly ruining scenes involving Enrique and Blake got old and was just really annoying. We're about to get a nice intimate moment between the two and Anhk has to show up and ruin it. It just kinda ruins the moment ya know.

And now comes in the major problems. Kazari betraying the Greeed. Now I know this might've happened in the series and it is in line with Kazari's character, but it was just kinda disappointing that the Greeed couldn't stick around in White Fang. In my opinion it was just wasted potential especially since I also really like how they were antagonistic to some of the White Fang members. Seriously, the Greeed had taken over White Fang, that SHOULD've been interesting. Instead its all ruined when Kazari betrays the other Greeed. I also really didn't like how the Greed were pretty much push overs in some fights. Like, I know CFVY are the strongest members in the school but Velvet easily beating Uva with NO weapons given to her by the Kougami Foundation was just dumb and kinda forced in my opinion.

Oh boy, and here we get to my BIGGEST problem with the fanfic. People are gonna kill me for this and I'm gonna sound like a huge hypocrite for saying this but, I didn't like it when you brought Pyhrra back to life, not just as a homunculus, I mean bringing her back in general. The reason why is because I just think its a huge cop out. Now I know people are gonna get upset with me and say that I'm acting hypocritical and that I got upset when Sheele died in Wild Omega. The thing is though the reason why I was so upset was that I had no prior knowledge on the series as well as her character and when I found out she died in the series and manga I was upset because you made the character and her romance with that incarnation of Enrique so good that I didn't want it to end so soon. It also doesn't help that Sheele BARELY got any development in the main canon and there are so many areas where her character can be explored more. Pyhrra was given her development and had plenty of screen time in the canon so when she did die, it was shocking sure but actually worked. I already knew she was gonna die and it did work, and they mourn her loss in an actual respective way instead of that whole "we're in war so we don't have time to mourn her loss" bullcrap as well as the fact that THAT incarnation of Enrique was then just gonna replace Sheele with Leone after her death which had upset me even more. So now that Pyhrra is brought back to life, it just undermines her death and feels like a cop out.

Well, I'm gonna have allot of enemies on from this comment alone. Anyways for my final thoughts on this fanfic. Simply put, I loved it. Despite my problems with it, as well as possible controversial opinion, I still think this is one of the best RWBY/Kamen Rider crossovers. I honestly don't think the others I might read could compare to this one. Everything here just feels more genuine, and I just fell in love with it and was invested all the way through. So for the score, I'm giving this a 9/10 meaning great. this is definitely one of my favorite fanfics and I hope the sequel is just as good if not better then this one.
Guest chapter 23 . 1/15/2019
And also if you have someone that you cared about so much than that would’ve happened to ankh as well he just didn’t want it to happen again
Guest chapter 23 . 1/15/2019
Give shadowbladeknight a break eternalking some stories can be different than the main story and for the ocs past it was bound to be revealed by sooner or later
EternalKing chapter 9 . 1/6/2019
Ankh's anger is out of nowhere despite not too long ago he was absolutely giving no fucks about humans or Faunus. Also the OC just feels like he's giving Jaune no fucks either despite his constant encouragement towards Velvet.
EternalKing chapter 3 . 1/6/2019
A trend in all your stories I noticed is the odd logic of characters and their thoughts and a forced interaction between characters. For example, your OC is almost contstantly hounded about his past, and where literally anyone would leave it as it is, he's never allowed to just leave it go, and it gets exposed almost immediately.
Shogun lord poke burst chapter 36 . 11/2/2018
Can Pyhrra be revived as a Greeed? Itd be a nice way for you to bring her back, I suggest animals relative to her origins.
I think maybe a greed without a base theme like felines or canines,
Falcon
Sword fish
Wasp
Shogun lord poke burst chapter 27 . 11/2/2018
Will you bring all those other medals and combos that didn't get a form in the series, they do have forms, they just never debuted or were used in the series, like the hermit crab medal
Shogun lord poke burst chapter 25 . 11/2/2018
Gravity's return, is gamel returning?
Jacob9594 chapter 39 . 4/10/2018
Now that was a great story. I am glad to have read the story.
Jacob9594 chapter 38 . 4/10/2018
I hope Gara suffers a horrible death for his actions.
Jacob9594 chapter 37 . 4/10/2018
Gara as Kamen Rider Poseidon, I like it
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