pensei que vc tinha sé inspirado na cena do hospital de the end of evangelion

I have read a lot of these and this one my dude is a masterpiece.

Love the premise and story. Only complaints are grammar, pan-pan vs Pen-Pen rea vs Rei etc, some OoC moments(Rei, Gendo, Shinji primarily), and some of the lemony moments were good but could have been expanded/described better. Also wrong words used, lots of typos.

Again great premise and end, just missing a bit in execution.

I got to say that I haven't laughed so much reading an Evangelion story, specially one that although not 100% serious it wasn't a crack fic, I was surprised Misato didn't join in the end lol. I was grinning and chuckling all the way through this and to be honest it is kind of refreshing from all the seriousness surrounding this world. I got to say that you outdid yourself because all of this has some logic and although some stuff was a bit unbelievable, the characters actions and reactions where pretty much on point, (except Rei in some instances but meh).

Funniest quote by Asuka "Rei has the personality of a piece of furniture" Hahaha, well done. This hands down is one of the funniest lines I have ever read in the Evangelion universe.

Only thing I would suggest, is that you go over this again with a spell check because you don't believe how many grammatical errors there are in this.

Anyways, this was pretty good read so thank you for the story!

What no misato happiness?

I see what you did there

Good story. However, you seriously need an editor as there are a plethora of misspelled words in Chapter 2 and are starting again in Chapter 3.

I do hope you get an editor soon

Keep up the good work.

KW

It seems this whole fic is cursed by the Rouge Angles off Satin...

It was at that moment when Shinji knew I have become the harem master all waifus are mine. With the help of my rape goddess REI Ayanami I will control the world. Fuck SEELE.

I swear to god that you're misspelling words on purpose.

Reading through this, it seems like you have a good idea for what you want to write about, but you didn't spend nearly enough time on spelling or grammar. This chapter could use a touch-up.

'Irasfel Special' Time! YEEAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!

I enjoyed your story and the characterizations...kind of hoping for a sequel because dear God, the last episodes and EoE could vary greatly from this.

It would be very interesting to read.

So this is the end huh? Here I thought that this story was going to go for another few chapters but hey who am I to complain especially when someone is willing to write about such a vastly underrated and unique pairing. Thank you so much for providing us all with such a great fan fiction showing how the three pilots finally decided to make some very sweet love together. The lemons are of course pretty top much stuff but I also care just as much for the story and characterization which tends to be ignored in many of the type of stories of this variety I have come across.

I read that in the beginning of the final chapter Rei Ayanami helped Asuka Sohryu realize the benefits of having a female lover as well. How very sexy that the two of them decided to have some passionate sex in Shinji Ikari's bedroom. That special ability of Rei is quite helpful. Thankfully though that she is not completely abusing it in such a negative manner which she is more than capable of doing so.

While at first I was utterly shocked that Misato did not join up with Asuka, Rei, and Shinji in his bed,I also completely understand that she did end up doing the right thing by letting them bond together on their own.

Plus it clearly took a whole lot of courage and honesty on Asuka's part to finally let her guard down so that the fiery redhead can accept both Rei and Shinji's love. A whole lot of hysteria if you will.

So while the three pilots are now in a menage a trios relationship,I have a really bad feeling that Gendo Ikari will use this to his advantage to keep them all in line for his sinister plans. Heck he even was considering replacing Rei with another clone until he put that idea on the backburner for the time being.

Speaking of that,sooner or later the blue haired girl will have to tell them the truth on that matter. I am very curious to see how Shinji takes that news,knowing that he is sleeping with a clone of his late mother.

I highly doubt though that it will cause him to stop loving her or else Asuka will have to straighten him out with some tough love.

You ended the story on a somewhat funny note with Asuka completely naked chasing Pen Pen and Misato coming home to see the German redhead in her full naked glory.

Well if you are considering a sequel,then obviously it will have to be about how the other NERV employees react to the three pilots' unique relationship. Also the other important question to consider is will Misato Katsuragi choose to let them bond without anymore interfere on her part.

In conclusion,congratulations on completing this wonderful story.

Nice ending to the story.

If there's a sequel I hope that Misato gets her happiness too... (not that she isn't already happy, but she could be happier, y'know?)

Great job!