Reviews for The Revolutionary Pirate
doubledamn chapter 15 . 1/27
Hmmmm... Are we sure that the Hie Hie no Mi is a Logia? Given the name it seems to imply control of low temperatures, instead of Ice. And with the introduction of Special Paramecia as a concept, well, it gets the gears a-turning.
Guest chapter 10 . 12/1/2019
10 chapters of build up and 5 chapters of story ,sigh!
yuzukikuran476 chapter 15 . 4/17/2019
Am glad that Ussop talking to his father and nami opening open about her past to luffy.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 14 . 4/17/2019
Well done luffy beating the crap out of Buggy and you too as well garp beating axe Morgan. Nami joins luffy and zoro and Sanji on their adventures and now how's luffy and his crew dealing with Yassop's home town with kuro taking over the place and meeting Ussop as well. This story is interesting.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 13 . 4/17/2019
This story is amazing and nami and sengoku appears in this chapter and I wonder what else would be going on in next chapter.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 12 . 4/17/2019
Am so happy for luffy he got himself two crew mates and I wonder if who else join luffy's crew and am curious does luffy want a big crew? or small crew?. Please keep updates coming for this amazing story.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 11 . 4/17/2019
Yes zoro and sanji appears in this chapter and this story is awesome.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 10 . 4/17/2019
Good luck luffy I hope that you find your crew and grow even stronger and am curious if Rayleigh meet luffy and law and ace and sabo and dragon and Rouge as well?.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 9 . 4/17/2019
Well done law you got your first pirate bounty.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 8 . 4/17/2019
Amazing law is sworn brother of ace and sabo and luffy and how come there isn't one piece stories with law being a sworn brother of ace and sabo and luffy?.
StarwardAscent chapter 1 . 12/5/2018
Yeah how dare somebody take the backbone of a story from another author and create their own spin on it?! Oh wait that's called fanfiction. Kind of hypocritical don't you think?
Guest chapter 16 . 9/10/2018
I never read this but I just wanted to say that I don't see any point in an author who can't properly write a story then drops it and doesn't put it up for adoption. Disgusting behaviour.
Momongaaction chapter 4 . 7/27/2018
you own nothing not even the stpry without buying copyright! You cant get copyright beaucuse the manga goes to jump and anime goes to toho so ... you dont own anything technically everyone can copy this story...
Nala1220 chapter 16 . 7/10/2018
i'm sorry to hear that too...please at the very least don't delete the fanfic because i would still like to reread it from time to time
GreenDrkness chapter 16 . 7/9/2018
Ok I totally understand the whole frustration of not being able to finish a basically plotted out story so thanks for giving us your outline it was still fun to read
Also this bothers me a quite a bit and I hope you take no offense to this but cancelation is spelled wrong in the title
Keep on the writes
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