Reviews for Blue
BorderLand chapter 5 . 6/21
Ok I never thoght I'll see the day where I ship Adam of all people with Ruby then there is Pyrrha and Jaune which for the second time when it comes to a story I am shipping it.

I have no clue if you plan to ship him with Blake but as things stand it simply dosent seem to be working in this story.
LordMentat chapter 5 . 6/12
looking forward to more someday. This is really good.
FanFicFan50 chapter 5 . 6/5
Please just continue writing this
Guest chapter 5 . 4/17
Me: Wow a great story!
Imyoshi: *makes 5 more great stories and doesn’t update for the universe*
Me: Welp! Those are also good! Now there’s too many! Fuck!
Tetho chapter 5 . 4/9
Another one bites tthe dust.
Dareth chapter 5 . 2/15
This has, surprisingly, much more depth to it than I first thought it would. The first chapter seemed to have been written more for laughs, than anything serious.
However, the development of the latter chapters are very smooth, the slow realization, by Jaune, of the sheer scope of the changes that came to him.
The use of his amplification semblance with his roar and it's effect on faunus, was downright clever.
The conflict, the branching paths, that arose because of the effect he now has on the (possibly) world scale.
Further characterization of Adam is very welcome, portraying him as having levels, instead of a single mass of obsessed/maniacal.

This is an excellent story!
Guest chapter 5 . 2/10
Gonna need a bigger sword with this angry attitude. Also jaune has the potential to be a MONSTROUS Powerhouse, Beyond Qrow, Ironwood, And Ozpin. I LOVE this concept.
leeaustin3512 chapter 5 . 1/1
love the fic, keep up the good work.
raheem05.rc chapter 5 . 12/29/2019
tis but a flesh wound
Dreaming of Glory chapter 5 . 12/26/2019
51 thousand words just fly by, amazing read, hope to see you continue this one
Lethaius chapter 5 . 12/22/2019
Really looking forward to more of this!
KorevainsoLightshire chapter 5 . 12/11/2019
So is Jaune's roar/beastial transformation his semblence or does he still get to keep his cannon semblance? Imagine him using his aura amplification semblance to enhance his aura roar. ALL THE BLOODY EVOLUTION!
KorevainsoLightshire chapter 5 . 12/11/2019
Based on when this was published and how many chapters there are, I'm assuming there isn't a planned update for awhile. But I still hope for more, this is great! Hopefully it updates more frequently.
B1ackAshes chapter 5 . 12/2/2019
I'm surprised that I haven't found your stories earlier. You're a helluva author and you have a very unique writing style in my opinion.

So far,.I am absolutely loving everything about this story and I just can't wait until it gets updated again!
Guest chapter 5 . 12/1/2019
Please continue
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