Berry berri nice. You put romance in one piece damn and a more serius crew too. Hope you continue this

I no you ready get enough of these comments but I just need to voice that this is a really good story. I have enjoy it so much, don't drop these stories it has so much potential.

Update please

Really good story dude, please don’t drop it there aren’t many good fanfics like these

The only thing I did not like was Vivi getting sick ,I don’t believe that should of changed ,that was a bonding thing between Luffy and from that everything else was as good as I expected ,hopefully more will come from this story.

Awesome chapter again,and yup I’m a fan of miss valentine,happy she joined and we got Robin early too .Yes It would be ironic if Robin used cp9 techniques on them , would be fucking awesome too .

Glad Luffy did not get caught ,don’t mind at all he still got zapped was so sure of himself ,not solid chapter sir .

Excellent chapter

Haha ,Nami took out Krieg and gin ,really enjoyed her fights,especially when she just Straight wrote gin off ,that was sick .

I do hope this continues in the future. Especially with the Theory of the Lost Kingdom of the Void Century also having a Sun in it's symbolism, like with its allies, Alabasta, Wano, and Skypeia.

Haha Kuro got smashed,Usopp got his end away ,lol. They get a nice payday too ,all is well ,for now.

Ye ,it doesn’t get any better than that .his fruit is so overpowered,I love it .

It doesn't matter if it's correct, as long as it sunds good, which it does. Like c'mon, Enjū. That's lit. Okay I'll stop now.

I'm crying because you haven't updated in so long. Plz im cryung

I love how Shanks proves that no matter how strong you are you must never get cocky.