while an interesting idea, the story is bit boring and riddled with spelling errors. you made the character too over powered

Asking again are you dead

Did you die?

I guess, in true pen and paper style, this story is more than a little meandering. There have been multiple opportunities for inciting incidents, such as Foquet's capture and the early revelation of Reconquista (If I remember correctly, the Albion revolution wasn't associated with Reconquista officially at first, and was instead framed as a normal internal coup.) Louise working at the Charming Faeries' Inn alone heavily implies that the timeline of Familiar of Zero is progressing with or without Rask's involvement. I admit that I am not certain about the timeline, but it seemed like the FoZ mission to Albion was shortly after Foquet's capture. I'm hoping that the protag group returns to Halkeginia only to find out that the mission already failed without them. Or maybe, since Wardes was oddly insistent about marrying Louise, then he may have refused to take the mission in the first place, and is still hoping to have Louise for himself.

Anyway, I like a lot of the characters and characterization, even if it can be a little dialogue and monologue heavy, and I'm hoping to see a more concrete direction for an overarching plot.

Oh god please just beat her ass already

Aay, an update! Thanks!
Some interesting stuff happened, and I like reading the teenagers reactions to everything.
You moved to a new country and got a new job? Damn, that sounds pretty hard.

Glad to see an update for this story! Aaaah, negociating tactics with demons…wonder if that will stick with Xylara. Or Cathilia for that matter. Seeing how the guard (tries to) deal with high-powered adventurers was fun. As was Louise still trying to get Raskreia to stay in Halkeginia: if nothing else, she's persistent. And good to see Raskreia’s thoughts about the situation, that’s not an usual position for most good-aligned adventurers. Also, I hope Thorgal had as many buffs as possible up during that discussion: antagonising that way a greater demon wouldn't have ended well if they really were out to wreck malevolent chaos.

Good to see you, and this story back!
That scene with the guards gave me quite many chuckles, and Cat, as always, was precious.
BTW. Could you remind me, what races the rest of the Ras's team are? I remember that Kwalin is a Dwarf, but can't recall the rest. Thorgal a human and Zarhon a Tiefling?

Does golden wyrms like lava bathes?

Wow. I can't believe you ended the chapter with that. Cruel. But entertaining!

Heh, that cliffhanger really got me.
They seems to encounter a few non aggressive demons on their travels... altho I guess having a Balor in your party might have something to do with it.
A very interesting idea making the students pretend to have an adventure alone, making them use their skills and wits.
Also, kind of funny how Louise snapped.
Oh. Who would win in a fight between Cathilia and Rask’s father.. I’m guessing Cathilia, but I’m curious.

Their first quest, nice!
Rather interesting chapter, also I’m glad Anna survived. I’ll be honest and say I kind of despise characters who show any kind of psychotic behavior or thoughts, although Cathilia seems to be as nice as a demon can be so I guess she gets a pass.
Also, yes! Nice reveal on Rask’s part.

Hahah, oh boy oh boy... things just took an unexpected turn!

Great chapter, a lot happened in it, although would have been interesting if the students had been a bit more paniced by the elf. On the other side, I guess it makes sense for them to calm down since Rask was talking casually to him.

And the demon, or should I say balor.. whatever that is..I’m gonna Google it.
First, she was locked inside there for 10k years? HOT DAMN... and Rask was 150?...lol... that’s one old demon.
She’s friendly? That’s nice.. I do love it when in stories, creatures who are normally evil, are the exception to the rule and are nice. But still a demon is a demon and I wonder what will happen from now on.
Also, I’m guessing that she’s way more powerful than Rask, since even she was shocked and a bit paniced by the reveal. To be honest, I’m not sure how I feel about a demon who is more powerful than Rask joining the party. Altho my feeling aside, it makes the story better a bit more realistic, since a story where the OC is the strongest is boring to most people.

I am VERY curious to see what is going to happen next, how will the demon interract with the other characters?

It's with the benefit of hindsight but did Louise put the kibosh on her plans to punish Rask? She didn't bring that up since.

Interesting adventure they’re on, and the part with the elf at the end was gold.
Also... maybe a reveal about Raskreia being a half dragon? I love reactions, and them reacting to her being a half dragon would be great.