Reviews for Harry Potter and the Circle of Light
Ar-Kaos chapter 1 . 7/17
I enjoyed the prequel to this quite a bit, and am enjoying your version of the Norns especially. But one thing that is ringing false is the name you gave Sirius. In america the so-and-so the third is used for a family who give the same names to their eldest, so you end up with three or four generations of men with the same first name, the eldest being Senior, then junior then so and so the third.

What that is being confused with here is the x-th lord of such and such. So Sirius could be 'Sirius the fourteenth lord of Darkmoor' or whatever title you wanted to give the Blacks, but he is highly unlikely to be adresed as 'the third' unless he was the third lord of the same (which seems an unlikely low number)

The other possible derivation is royal nomenclature where you have William the first, second and third... but that is only used for royals unless you're talking Game of thrones where they use 'third of his name' more generally.

So yes, please, Sirius Black the thirtieth lord of County Durham, or the Twentieth Lord of Chipping Sodbury.. but just being called 'the third' seems very, very wrong.. I think
Jimbocous chapter 8 . 6/17
Thanks for a great continuation. Hope real life permits you to resume this at some point!
lunadream13 chapter 8 . 2/14
Hope you continue this great story.
ramunes chapter 8 . 12/18/2019
hi great story i hope this story will keep going please more chapters
Monster King chapter 8 . 12/18/2019
Great update please continue soon I enjoyed it a lot
tymaxion chapter 8 . 11/18/2019
Hoping you update soon~ This story is amazing so far and I really want to see more as the first story was incredible!
the late Aimee chapter 7 . 10/12/2019
This story is great - could you please add another chapter?
bkerrmom1 chapter 8 . 9/28/2019
I love this story sooooo much ! I am looking forward to seeing what comes next !
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 8 . 8/23/2019
A great chapter here.
the late Aimee chapter 8 . 8/13/2019
Hopefully this great story isn't abandoned, so could you please do another chapter, pretty please?
Joshera chapter 5 . 7/22/2019
The password is 'open' being too simple is intended. Salazar wanted the Chamber opened by a Parselmouth.
the late Aimee chapter 1 . 7/5/2019
great story, please continue..
...give us a new chapter, pretty please.
Sefera chapter 8 . 5/18/2019
Very good! I’m favoriting this! I look forward to more in the future, should you ever choose to continue it...
Warn Almstek chapter 8 . 5/18/2019
Great Story!
IMHO your Harry is a bit too perfect, too much of a model child; e.g. his report about the petrification cases is way to comprehensive for someone his age, that would be more fitting for Shin’ichi Kudō.
But still on of the best HP-Xovers I've read and I'm eager waiting for the next chapter.
bauers374 chapter 8 . 4/19/2019
Using numbers to predic the future... Oh yeah muggles do that too, It's called Statistics
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