Reviews for A Grey Halloween
RomanceLover2018 chapter 1 . 5/10
I am dying of laughter! I love it!
Fifty Shades Girl chapter 3 . 11/10/2019
Such a cute story!
Carol222 chapter 3 . 10/29/2019
I read half of this chapter out loud, and howled! You are the master of visual comedy.
Meeting up with Jose in the little VW was hilarious. Everyone scrunched in, and Jose planning a day with Anam the kids and a picnic lunch!
The Zombie Apple Lips parade was pretty funny, too.
And all those ladies at pre-school playing up to Christian!
I do enjoy your family stories, with Chrisyian on the losing side of the kids' antics!
Carol222 chapter 2 . 10/29/2019
Don't know how things could get worse! Between the nutty neighbors, Phoebe's itchy wig, Dr. Rear-End, the crafty dentist, Christian can't catch a break. Ana was smart to get sick!
Carol222 chapter 1 . 10/29/2019
Brilliant. Hysterical. Visually funny! Love Christian/Jason interaction! Phoebe and the rat! Teddy drivng hid mini Audi in the house collecting trash!
twlightbella chapter 3 . 7/17/2019
Funny
Guest chapter 3 . 10/24/2018
Looved it!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/24/2018
Lol soo funny!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2018
Lol poor Christian! I love that you get his crazy!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/5/2018
Have been reading your stories based on fifty shades. This is not how I pictured Christian Grey but I LOVE IT! They are great stories and so funny. I think my favorites are Phoebe and her menagerie (live animal and stuffed), especially Chester but have to admit there is something about Taylor too. Thank you for the great stories, they leave me smiling.
Petite Mule chapter 1 . 8/20/2018
You really make me laugh! Thank you!
shootingstars1986 chapter 3 . 3/24/2018
Brilliant!
al chapter 3 . 11/22/2017
Again OMG! I cant stop laughing...i am in love with your words and ideas!
fundays chapter 3 . 10/5/2017
Oh my god! This story needs a warning. Thanks for all the laughs.
bertha55 chapter 1 . 10/3/2017
you wrote one awesome Halloween story it was so adorable an so funny I could stop laughing on all3 chapters I hope you wright more story like this
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