Reviews for Surprise Arrival |
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CaptKgg chapter 13 . 8/1 THIS IS THE BEST FANFIC I’VE READ SO FAR OHMYGOD PLS CONTINUE THIS |
Jaimee chapter 4 . 7/7 1: this is comedy gold! "We can't leave those two alone with that poor child," Tenten whispered to the only other sane member of Team Gai. "Agreed," Neji muttered back. "Ah, we'll help too, Kakashi-sensei," Tenten said before bringing her voice down to a whisper, "and keep the two of them in line." "Thank you…!" Kakashi told them sincerely, seemingly on the verge of tears. The poor man was probably imagining the horrifying influence Gai and Lee could have on his poor child. Said child was currently being comforted by Naruto and Sakura after that terrifying encounter. XD dying of laughter right now! |
TomRiddlesTwin chapter 13 . 5/9 So sweet! |
Procrastinatingismyforte chapter 13 . 5/3 Oh dear me, I really can't wait till you update again! I really want to see kakashi's reaction is to being called papa! |
f3liciachloe chapter 13 . 2/23 Aww I love this story so much, ive re-read it so much i think i can recite it by memory! I know it's been a couple of years since you last updated but I hope to see this continue one day... in the meantime I will be creating scenarios in my head for what happens next... much love |
BananaOctopus chapter 13 . 2/11 Listen, I know its been years since you last updated, and I don’t even know if you still read comments anymore... but this is probably one of the cutest things I’ve ever read. Kakashi’s characterization is amazing, just the right amount of humour and awkwardness. I love Ran, she’s adorable and so loveable! You’ve written a really good story, I hope that one day you might come back to it, just for some closure :) |
LupinLyra chapter 13 . 7/7/2019 how sweet! I loved the story, please continue ️️ |
tomkatan chapter 13 . 2/17/2019 Really cute stuff |
e.e HappyEnd e.e chapter 13 . 2/11/2019 This is so precious, she call him Papa omg |
SamsaraMorningstar chapter 13 . 2/9/2019 Omg I cant believe you left us in that awful cliffhanger, I need an update, she finally call him papa, im crying. please update soon! |
LittleMiniMe21 chapter 13 . 1/20/2019 Omg I love little Ran so much TToTT poor girl lost her mom, and then Asuma, who she didnt know well but smelled like her Jiji, she must be terrified of losing Kakashi too if he goes. Unless he talks to her about it or something. Hope to see an update soon! |
Kayla chapter 13 . 8/21/2018 Awe Ran is worried about kakashi. Please post the next chapter soon. |
Elizabetch chapter 1 . 6/29/2018 I love your story please update soon |
Master-ofmanga chapter 13 . 6/26/2018 Please update soon, I need to see where this goes! |
Shadow the Ranger chapter 13 . 6/21/2018 God I love this fic, it's so good! Hope to see the next chapter soon. |