Reviews for Adventures in Magick
lonewolf420 chapter 7 . 11h
First off let me say I love this story so far. That being said, when I read a story sometimes I have ideas or I see scenes in my head involving the characters im reading about. You would think I'd be great at fan fic. Sadly no. Only ever have idea. Anyway. I was reading this story and for some reason I seen your Harry potter giving a sort of speech like he is with the cloths. In it he's talking about how the magical world has forgotten, somehow. When asked to explain he explains how at one time the magical world has so many more wonders. Like the enchanted armor and all the adventures that are documented into fiction in the non magical world. He explains that's the reason for muggle horns we let a few into our world not to change it or to rule over them as lower class. We bring them in and share the wonders of our world with them as equals in exchange for them keeping us informed and up to date on what the non magical world is doing. They heavily become our eyes and ears in every branch of there world. While enjoying and helping us keep our world safe and secret. After all there children are a part of it. I don't know why I seen this as I hadn't even thought of that angle about muggle horns till then. Feel free in use this in any thing you do in the future if you like.
myafroatemydog chapter 2 . 7/12
Well done
myafroatemydog chapter 1 . 7/11
Interesting first chapter
CrimsonQueen24 chapter 32 . 7/6
Holy cow this story is fantastic! I was intrigued at the rather vague summary, so I thought I’d give it a whorl. And I was instant thrilled! This Harry is not only adorable but also terrifying in his ingenuity. The exasperation of others in regards to Harry makes me laugh. I truly adore this plot and can’t wait to see what happens next! Also, it’s quite fitting that your story has a unidentified disease ravaging Hogwarts when a similar scenario is occurring in the real world. At least we have a name but still no antidote...anywho, I’ve been reading this story non-stop and have been fully engrossed in all the little details. I love how Neville has become such a figure lurking in the shadows collecting blackmail :) Plus the relationship between Harry and Draco is simply too sweet! Seriously, I can’t wait for the next update~
Scarecrow94 chapter 16 . 6/30
Ok
Scarecrow94 chapter 1 . 6/30
Thanks
OmaBlack chapter 15 . 6/7
LOL at every chapter. Loving this story!
G Fawkes chapter 31 . 6/3
How is it even possible to type "Draco through his arms out..." ?! If your program(?) Word processor(?), whatever,(!) defaults to through instead of threw, don't you have to ACCEPT it, or something? Would it not discard through as an option, the second you type the E in threw?
I just don't get wrong WORD errors. Spelling? Sure. You spelled regardless as 'reguardless' earlier. Who cares? (First time I ever saw THAT, but so what!) Lots of to and too errors but that probably only annoys ME. it's unbelievable how many "writers" , can't discern the difference.
"Oh! Oh! I want to be a writer!"
- Then learn to f***ing WRITE! LEARN English! Spelling! Punctuation! Syntax (wtf ever THAT is). Buy a real g*dd*mned hardcover dictionary and a paperback thesaurus, so you don't even have to reduce the page and pull , or something. Typing really should be the ONLY corrections you need to go back and fix.
And yes, I'm probably OLDER than your dad. If my son wasn't autistic, I would have beaten this stuff into him. As it is his mother was the special ed teacher (retired 38 years) (not his school) she told me I wasn't allowed!
G F chapter 26 . 6/3
Ooh, ooh! I know him! Trenton Quarrantino!
GF chapter 24 . 6/2
If he keeps this up, he's going to be fourteen years older when he graduates (real time), not seven.
BoOmErT.63 chapter 7 . 6/2
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS READ!
AS I AM STUCK IN THE HOSPITAL FOR A COUPLE MORE DAYS... read this again i shall!
GF chapter 20 . 6/2
Dumbledick?
G Fawkes chapter 19 . 6/2
Credit where it is due... This is getting better, even if it has gone off in a completely unexpected direction.
G Fawkes chapter 19 . 6/1
I don't want to be Troll guy, here, but it sounds like somebody's bubble needs bursting, just a little. You may have HAD (monthly updates and still a dozen or so to go at this point)(ch19) one of the top CURRENT fics, as yet unfinished, or maybe ' Harry/Draco- no slash', cuz how many of Those are there?! I'm pretty sure it's not the "ALL TIME, bestest ever, totally amazing, earth shattering, Harry Potter fanfreakintastic fanfiction list". Sorry. Not buyin' it.
You want good? You read everything ROBST ever wrote, and then all of his favorites. Now all of OLD CROW, and all of His favs, minus the overlap from ROBST. Chem Prog and his list. James Spookie and his. "Sympathetic Proberties" by Mr Norell is ongoing at 610K words. THAT is the best current fic, if not for the torturous wait between chapters. Covid not helping.
Worth mentioning is King in Yellow's "Hogwarts 1835" , and "Hogwarts 1940", both period pieces with ancestors of the modern cast. Delightful.
"Brave New World" by Bellerophon30 (not on FFN) is my number two all time fav. "Harry Crow" by ROBST is still number one. When it's done, Mr Norell is probably going to be three.
BTW. My parameters are - it has to be on someone's favs list, not just pulled random off some filter page. Over forty k, but a tiny few are 20k. Most are 100k and up. Almost NO HP/Ginny. I hate the gold digging whore. A few at the start, a long time ago, snuck in. I steer away from drama and angst, preferring the action adventure or family and romance (occasionally) types. Hermione or Daphne ships welcome (again, anyone BUT Ginerva) And last, I try for complete, but sometimes I forget to look and get sucked in to an ongoing story.
So..? Where does that put this little ditty? So far, cuz I'm not finished? Yeah. Top 200? Out of 1200? I'd take it.
GF chapter 18 . 6/1
You keep asking. So here goes...
There was a young girl from Nantucket...
Nah. Better keep it PG.
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