Reviews for Harry Potter's Concubine Court
nope chapter 8 . 5/12
what the actual fuck is this...
Screamindivr145 chapter 2 . 3/13
I hate to break it to you, but 6 inches doesn’t make someone as big as a horse. Six inches is the literal definition of average.
The Real Hell Fire chapter 5 . 12/4/2019
This chapter immediately turned me off. Femdom, ew.
Meazm chapter 13 . 11/28/2019
Need more!
thunderofdeath97 chapter 13 . 11/15/2019
so the girls are sluts that sleep around ? that cliche, also hermione would not have lost her virginity to anyone before marriage i think, she just strikes me as that type of woman
Guest chapter 3 . 9/12/2019
6 and a half isn't big, if you actually think it is, damn what a disappointment you are, and really, the 'Ginny been sleeping around like a slut cliche', how unoriginal and lazy, how novice of you.
nymlover chapter 13 . 7/31/2019
great story well done
Anonymous chapter 13 . 7/22/2019
Are you writing another chapter after this? That would be awesome, reading these makes me horny as fuck...so i'm always ready
Anonymous chapter 12 . 7/22/2019
Potter Playpen...Fuck yeah, i like it
RICHBICH chapter 11 . 7/22/2019
Draco?! And Pansy?! You're fucking kidding me! And Harry giving Draco advice! That shit is crazy. Love your imagination bro, Draco is totally fit to fuck that bitch! His dick belongs in her cunt man.
nc chapter 9 . 7/22/2019
cio
Guest chapter 5 . 6/15/2019
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA the eating a brick thing was really funny
Guest chapter 12 . 6/14/2019
Hahaha imagine this actually happening in the books
Guest chapter 3 . 5/23/2019
Unexpected - Brooke's P.O.V - Chapter 3

"Michelle!" Mum says and they hug.

I walk back into the kitchen and smile at Michelle, purposely ignoring her son. Michelle's wearing jeans, a denim shirt and a denim jacket. Her son's wearing a black shirt, black pants and has a golden necklaces with a hint of the color red. Not bad.
I hug Michelle, saying hi as I do so. With a fake smile, I face her son.

"Hi, we didn't properly meet the other day, but I'm Brooke. You may already know that but I might as well introduce myself." I say and he nods.

Turning around to face Mum, Michelle walks past me to sit next to her. As Isaac does, I feel his fingers brush my waist. I look at him as he sits down but his face is like as if he didn't do anything. I do a mental mind roll not wanting him to notice me as his eyes do a survey of my body.

I sit down next to Mum as Michelle introduces herself to my Dad. When Michelle and Dad finishes talking, Mum stands up to make the cup of tea.

"So, Isaac, you play any instruments?" Dad asks.

"Um, yea." Isaac nods. "Guitar, piano, flute, guitar, drums and a little of the trumpet. What about you?"

"Bass, guitar, piano and drums." Dad replies.

"Maybe we should jam one day." Isaac smiles and Dad agrees.

I can't help but notice his smile. His smile is so different, like it's hiding something; something from the world, something from his fans or even something from himself. His smile is so natural, like those ones from fictional bad boys have - those classy, turn on smiles. He notices me staring and slightly smirks.

"Brooke, can you get the milk from the fridge?" Mum asks and I stand up.

I open the fridge and get the milk. Just as I'm giving the milk to her, someone knocks on the door. Michelle offers to open it and when she does, a little girl with the cutest bangs runs in. Her mother, Miriam, walks in too and I smile. Miriam and I talk a lot. After Mum finishes making the tea, then gives each one to Dad, Michelle and Isaac.

Miriam and I decide to go into the living room as her daughter runs after us, all hyped.
Your boy chapter 13 . 4/8/2019
Please i need more
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