Fantastic story. Loved all the character studies, as well as your takes on the characters, especially Kyouko. I just cannot imagine Hibari speaking Taishanese. The very thought is bizarre, but I'm glad you included it because it's so scarcely mentioned in Western literature.

omg i am enjoying this story so much hahaha

Came for the deadpan, stayed for the feels.

As heartwarming as this scene was I still have to drop this. I was serious when I said this story had one real draw to new readers, but here you are fixing the only thing special about your fanfic. I've paid attention to these last two chapters and not once have you described Tsuna as bland, emotionless, flat or anything remotely similar to the advertised Dead-Eyed Tsuna. How is that any fun?

I'm kind of concerned about how emotive he's becoming, how quickly it's happening. It's kind of your thing you know, the aspect of this story making Tsuna unique.

It was a good story! I'm going to read the next one! Many kisses!

hahah good

hahahhhahah great

That killed me. Thank you for writing this brilliantly dark story.

Nurse!Gokudera is bae. Who am I kidding? All these kids are bae. ;) Love the chapter! XD

He really does love his dramatics. ;) Love the chapter! XD

I love it! XD

Love everything about this brilliant chapter/story! XD

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant! XD

Thank you for writing this.