Reviews for A Whirlpool Full of Sunshine
I-Nex-I chapter 3 . 10/27/2018
I know this one isn’t supposed to be taken too seriously, but I just couldn’t get into this. Hinata awakened the Tenseigan? Somehow knows the uses of Truth-Seekers? Toneri likely learned all about the Tenseigan and it’s abilities, so that explains him. All others who have awakened the Truth Seekers had Six Paths Sage Mode, through either receiving Hagoromo’s chakra directly or the Ten Tails Coffin Seal. With SPSM comes Universal Knowledge of All Things, which allows them to innately know how to use the orbs. Also Hinata just rushed at them at supersonic speeds? Tenseigan would give very largely hypsersonic, as he kept up with KCM3 Naruto. Could be somewhere below that and just largely hypersonic though, as Naruto didn’t feel the need to go SPSM with KCM2 which puts him at massively hypersonic, with sub-relativistic reaction times. Also base Hinata should be supersonic. Though granted, after years of downtime she may not be able to handle it
Broadwaymania chapter 8 . 8/2/2018
please keep it going !
Broadwaymania chapter 8 . 8/2/2018
wow I loved it!
Broadwaymania chapter 7 . 8/2/2018
so cute! ~
Broadwaymania chapter 6 . 8/2/2018
the endings are always so awesome TT Neji! I loved how u gave us a happy ending even if the story is dark..I loved it!
Broadwaymania chapter 5 . 8/2/2018
great prompt!
Broadwaymania chapter 4 . 8/2/2018
too. damn. cute. fluffy. romantic. dramatic. awesome. funny. it was a great chapter I loved it so much
Broadwaymania chapter 3 . 8/2/2018
wow man that was deep o.o I loved it
Broadwaymania chapter 2 . 8/1/2018
XD the last part...hilarious Lolol this chapter was perfect!
Broadwaymania chapter 1 . 8/1/2018
so cute...heartbeat... -
itsxoi chapter 8 . 3/30/2018
With angst come to interplay with love, it just made the story beautifully wonderful. Thank you for this fic.. hoping for more stories from you
itsxoi chapter 7 . 3/30/2018
I can't believe that the chapter was able to contain the overwhelming and overflowing fluffiness of this fic.
itsxoi chapter 6 . 3/30/2018
It was breaking my heart. This chapter broke my heart. Especially with the epilogue, it's a really new perspective of things to how Neji came to a decision to protect Naruto and Hinata. Support all the way.
itsxoi chapter 5 . 3/30/2018
awwwwww... I love OTP'S! Go Naruhina! Go spread your fluffiness of love!
itsxoi chapter 4 . 3/30/2018
hahahahahaha... I love what Naruto did back there! And with team eighths comments, it was not funny. It is gawdayum, downright hilarious. I love how you write a little omake on every chapwell , that's how I consider thembut if you think about it , it is a continuation of the chapterNevertheless, beautifully done. .
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