Roman now owns that ass.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this. I NEED to know what happens next

Holy fuck, after reading this, I imagined Roman acting like a tsundere. I can't stop laughing. Send help. Muy bueno

I'm back, and the the mast of the glorious rosewick ship rises long and hard from my trousers... I honestly don't know what I meant by that, but I'm distracting myself. Once again, you deliver my fix. Just seeing Roman and Junior interacting not only provides a base that resembles logical from which we shall launch this glorious crack ship like a cartel boat, it also shows that you've improved, the dialogue is interesting, characters are believable, and we have junior and roman bro-ing it up! If you fail me, I will set my balls on fire and cartwheel to your home and play rick Astley's "Never Gonna Hive You Up" for 78 hours straight. No pressure.
Your friendly neighborhood meme thief,
Steele
P.s. I may have accidentally glued my self to a ceiling fan while writing this review, so please excuse any spelling errors

I just finished reading this and it's by far my favorite Rosewick fanfic! I loved how made Ruby go and join RJN, that's was very different (in a good way). It was my fav part and I hope now with Vol. 4 you'll continue writing this, cause I would love to read more of it. ️

Moar.

A good ship name would be: A large bowl of Ice Cream.

awesome

Continue

This is by far one of my favorite Rosewick stories... please don't let the next volume not being out stop you from writing more. This story is too good to have a hiatus or even stop.

you should continue when rwby volume four comes out.

-I'd say that this story has quite a lot going for it, and I would definitely like to see what you do with it. The main divergence from canon that I'm seeing here is that Roman I both: a:alive and b:a good guy, and there's also the matter of Emily. As for how that affects things, well, I'll just have to wait and see.

-Thanks for the story. See you at the next one.
-HHH1

-Hm. Looks like Salem's anteing up. Mommy seems pissed now, so our heroes would do well to watch their backs.

-HHH1

-Huh. Well, that happened. Shame that Pyrrha still died in the end, but what's done is done. Seems like Ruby's still got her super eye powers from canon, so there's that. For the most part, the finale proceeded like it did in canon, with some differences here and there. That does leave the question of what happens next, of course. Can't wait to see that.

-Thanks for the update. See you at the next one.
-HHH1

On the fence here, majority of the story was good and did it's own thing, then you just inserted everyone into the finale which made it a bit clunky.

Not too mention that you just slipped penny's death in there, and the fact that it is a catalyst for negative emotions that draw Grimm which you ignored kinda offsets the story as well.

You had so much going for the story than you want with a super clunky ending that isn't really an ending as it is more the finale for the show.

Part of me wants you to continue the story because of summer and raven and you view of salem, but I also feel that it will be clunky and hard to read.

I'll try and read a sequel if you decide to write it.