Reviews for Plot Bunnies and Drafts
Lumene chapter 4 . 6/12/2018
I like this last one better, I always love mysterious Harry who doesn’t tell the his life story to “strangers” who he met couple times. Like in both your fic where he told to Hughes.

And at the same time I also love Harry who doesn’t have his save people thing anymore. So him being badass assassin is awesome. I hope one day you will ha e enough inspiration to continue this again.
Nyx the Author chapter 3 . 4/5/2017
Oh my god! I absolutely LOVE the way the first draft of the Hp/FMA. I hope you plan to make more of it soon! Also, I wonder what Scar would think when he finally meets God/Truth/Harry. I mean, he says that alchemists have no right to mess with god (or something like that) so seeing what god is actually like should be interesting. Also, just a suggestion, maybe harry's marauder side comes out and makes all nearby females suddenly have miniskirts when near Roy? :D Good Luck!
ToonyTwilight chapter 2 . 7/28/2016
This is a very interesting crossover maybe the best HPxFMA I have ever read!
StoneTheLoner chapter 2 . 7/26/2016
It takes the fun out of the story when all the mysteries are explain so quickly and simply.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/15/2016
I like the third one best. It seems to be the most dynamic, with possible failure rather than just god mode potter. It also has more active voice from Harry's side and less repetitive im god interaction when being introduced to new people which got tiring in the other two. Would hoenhiem recognize harry as truth? Who replaces harry as gatekeeper?
Meh chapter 3 . 7/14/2016
I like the previous one better.
kylC chapter 4 . 5/2/2016
ahhh I love this HP x FMA crossover. Especially the third draft. I'd love it if you ever decide to continue this and make it its own fic. That'll be great.
Lady Lily Anne chapter 4 . 3/25/2016
It's a toss-up for me between draft 3 and draft 2 for me. Draft 1 and 2 are almost the same, but I think Draft 2 flows smoother. Draft 3 is different in perspective, and I think it would make a good story, but how much would the Elrics and the others find out about him? How does alchemy fit into his world of magic? Whereas in the second version, they all know from the start, there are no surprises. There is a plausible reason for both magic and alchemy; the likes of which is used in FMA anyways. You might have to put a little backstory for the others to fully understand Harry, but I like where you're going with the story. This is just my opinion though, so feel free to take it into consideration r ignore it. Thanks for giving us the opportunity to see what you've come up with, and I look forward to the final product.
R. A Cross chapter 2 . 2/22/2016
Chapter 2 review:
Hmmm...it's also nice to see this to be continued but the Harry in this fic doesn't give of much of the 'Truth' vibes. He readily gives information even though no one asks about it. Of course, I'm talking about the side- information. Details that doesn't necessarily affect the main story. In short I find Harry quite talkative when it comes to certain details. I quite like his personality here but yeah...
R. A Cross chapter 1 . 2/22/2016
Nice one~ I want a continuation.
Lol for Death though, haha so savvy!
And basically, Harry is Death's servant...er slave...er...Butler...er Master? Lol