Reviews for Rivers Run Red
Guest chapter 14 . 7/19
please update
Phazer12 chapter 3 . 7/2
I may have just started the story now but your explanations were not really needed. It was quite obvious that Naruto won't recognize Shikamaru to be a Nara and even if did, what, would he run away or strike him without any reason. For people who don't understand the thought behind simple things, shouldn't even try to poke holes.
Taldorei chapter 14 . 6/17
Hey Sabersoul!

The short version is: I really enjoy your story and hope to read more chapters soon!

The long version: I've read quite a few Naruto fanfics on this forum over the past years as a silent guest, but decided to create an account and follow your story. It has become rare that I enjoy a story nowadays as I have accumulated more and more personal red flags for Naruto fics like Naruto being an emotionless prick, women being attracted to him for no reason, endless descriptions of training to gain new jutsus and powers and and and...you get the picture.

Not only do you manage to avoid such turnoffs, but you've created a story with an interesting and unique plot approach while still staying true to the Naruto-Universe. The characters act based upon believable motives and you succeed in conveying their emotions without pages of inner monologues.

The only point I don't find convincing is your decision to let Naruto walk into the Hidden Sand village without a proper plan. The way your Naruto (not cannon Naruto) is portrayed up to that point of the story makes me think he would at least have SOME kind of plan. He would'nt have survived outside a ninja village for so long with such a carefree attitude. Of course it is important to show that Naruto is not perfect and makes mistakes too (if that was your goal here?) but I feel like this could have been achieved in other ways (like his plan having some flows or him making mistakes during the execution of the plan). Anyway, this is largely me complaining about first world problems because all in all I really enjoy your story and I think you are a talented writer.

I especially loved the latest chapter as I am a sucker for a good lovestory combined with some action and drama. I would'nt mind Temari joining to build a serious love triangle (and her not only being a convenient reason for Tayuya to get jealous and realize her feelings for Naruto).

Greetings,
Taldorei
Raver1601 chapter 14 . 6/8
Good shit friend. Hope you can finish this :)
DJ10-15 chapter 14 . 6/6
Absolutely love this story and hope that you choose to continue with it.
Deadmann1 chapter 14 . 6/6
Yes please continue and dont go missing nin on us again
Hiatagi-Satori chapter 14 . 6/5
Been awhile; I thought all the NaruTayu writers up and disappeared for the longest time. Welcome back, when this popped up in my email I actually had to go and reread this story to make sure it was the one I thought it was (which it was). Hope to see more and if this turns into a love triangle/shared relationship I can say that I would not be surprised at all; having reread and felt atleast that is where it was leading.
scacasdddii chapter 14 . 6/5
Happy to see you've picked this back up again. Had to reread the story again to remember everything.
crazylony chapter 14 . 6/5
Def try to continue. Honestly had to go reread it since I forgot this completely but that's not a bad thing.
Pls keep going!
SPark681 chapter 14 . 6/3
Hmm, I gotta wonder what shape Tayuya will be in when she wakes up anyways keep up the great work!
Guest chapter 14 . 6/2
Resurrection would be nice yeah
NaruCrazy chapter 14 . 6/2
Dude I had to re-read the entire fic to understand what happened earlier in the fic cuz its been so damn long and I rarely forget the story of the fic I have read once and followed (I wish it was same for studies and work :/ ). Don't take such a long hiatus man, it will ruin the fic. I like how it is going and there are not many holes or such to criticise.

The ending was nice and with the flow so to speak. Keep up the good work and keep updating.
edwardskeniyea chapter 14 . 6/2
!SPOILER! I Read A Lot Of Fanfiction. This Is One Of My Favorite Stories. I Literally Spent Years Looking For It. The Chapter I Had Left Off On Was The One Where Tsunade Died And I Remember Jumping Up And Down Amazed At Your Writing. I Have Followed And Faved But I've Favorited A Lot Of Stories So I Could Never Find It. And Then You Updated It And I Have Never Been Happier. Thank You For Writing This Story. I Would Love To Read More Chapters And I Just Wanted You Too Know You're Awesome.
Guest chapter 14 . 6/1
Yessss temari naruto lets gooo
Coon Raider chapter 14 . 6/1
Just binge read your entire story in a day and it's fucking fantastic. I know one review may not matter but I do hope you keep writing this story. You got a really good thing going and the Temari twist was unexpected. One idea though is if Tayuya is so good at receiving transplants you could later on transplant an arm or keep the puppet arm with some nifty tricks. Just food for thought.
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