Excellent chapter. I loved the fights and the bonding with the new characters. However, these Hellions sound creepy especially Takuya. Loving them so far too. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you for another great update

Finally was able to finish this chapter. It was an interesting chapter nonetheless. Flare and Natsu having trouble with themselves really brought about some character development. But the fight with Kagura against the Hellions was a fun read. I don't know about funny, but they were entertaining to say the least. Glad that you're resuming this story too. Can't wait for the next one.

First of all, it's good to see this fic again. Second, welcome back. Third, I loved how the characters acted like a family in this chapter. I just love that togetherness that makes characters bond with each other and develop relationships. It was a wholesome chapter and I especially loved what you did with Gray too. That would be great if he was THE man in Fairy Tail.

Excellent update and thank you for continuing the story

Please update this story

It's a good and well made story so far, I'm looking forward to the updates. I gotta ask though, why did name the Indian guy Persia?

UPDATE!

Pretty good fic, can't wait for more!

I like that natsu is learning new magic along with happy. It always seemed a moot point to specialize in only one type of magic. What I don't like are all the minor crossovers that is existent.

I like the amount of things going on in this chapter. it is quite busy but I find that you Say "I'm fired up!" way too much. maybe that was just a quip for the chapter and it went over my head but it seemed too extensive of a usage.

good chapter man. I just saw this in my emails and I thought you stopped writing fanfics altogether. you'll be getting reviews almost every chapter from me!

Excellent chapter and I thank you for the shout-out. Looking forward to the next chapter. Let me know if you want anymore help.

Awesome job with the update chapter and Natsu's letter to Fairy Tail.

First I like to say i love you story and can't wait till the next chapter comes out, and to keep up the great work. Next i got one question it's about Happy. Where did you come up with his Beast King Form.