Reviews for Jewels and Crows
Guest chapter 21 . 4/29
Great story I really like it.
Could you please update it!
BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 21 . 5/1/2019
Man I’d love to see more of this!
Guest chapter 21 . 1/25/2019
yeeeeeees know i finally can sleep! after finiishing every chapter in a hurry thanks!
Mernom chapter 21 . 10/13/2018
Interesting fighting style for Shirou here. Callback to FMA? I like. Properly used, the basic 4 can do wonders.

One thing about Tracing: it doesn't actually allow the user to read the past user's skills. In on itself, it's just EXTREMELY detailed projection.
What DOES allow it is his broken Structural Analysis and how it interacts with his aligned element and origin. It allows him psychometry level of detail extraction, which is then permanently saved in his Reality Marble (which breaks it even more).
ON TOP of that, with enough exposure to Archer, his Structural Analysis kicks off automatically, for practically free, on sight.
Mernom chapter 20 . 10/13/2018
Two small mistakes in the Russian text here: I'm going to try to explain, but I don't have access to a Russian keyboard so I'll have to emulate with English.
First is with sakura's 2nd line. In Russian, there is more than one word for 'you'. 'Te' can be used in most situationswho are you', 'kto Te'), but at that point, you need a different version. In this case, you need to use 'tyeba'. I'm not sure how exactly it's written, since I don't read Russian often at all.

The 2nd error is in Shinji's line. His first word is 'pereyedote', but in that context, the prefix 'perewhich is basically 're', as in redo the action described) is not needed.
Mernom chapter 9 . 10/12/2018
It's good that while I can't read fuelnt Russian, I can read enough to have an understanding of what the arias mean.
Unlike when people type out Medea's magic in Greek...
Mernom chapter 8 . 10/12/2018
So the Archibald faction refuse to be used as tools by the 2nd, so instead of doing the obvious, they do nothing...
Keikaku no dori desu?
Mernom chapter 7 . 10/12/2018
Sakura's magecraft is a bit similar to that girl from Fate/Prototype.
Mernom chapter 5 . 10/11/2018
I wonder how would Sakura interact with Shinji from the HP crossover series...
Mernom chapter 4 . 10/11/2018
Technically, the Kaleidoscope doesn't time travel, he simply leaves the world, and enters it at a different point of time. There's no rule that the time has to be synced across the multiverse (and between it)...
In fact, between time dilation and other similar physical phenomena, it's not synced even in the real world.
Mernom chapter 3 . 10/11/2018
I don't think that full divine spirits can be summoned as servants. They don't go to the throne after all.
If you had access to the spirit, and could hack a piece off to put in a servant container, however... After all, servants are basically pieces of the full Heroic Spirit's legend, incarnate as a Ghost Liner like familiar.
Mernom chapter 2 . 10/11/2018
From the sounds of the prologue, is Shirou with Medea? I wonder how this came to be...
Mernom chapter 1 . 10/11/2018
Well, this is good enough to justify scouting your profile for more stuff like this.
NomadicNine chapter 21 . 6/11/2018
Waitin' for the next chapter...
Guest chapter 21 . 4/22/2018
This is a great story. I hope you countine to write this story and update soon. Please.
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