Reviews for Harry Potter and The Revenge of the Goblet of Fire
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 8 . 7/20
This would have been a better story had the story ended at Chapter 5.
NhaTrang chapter 1 . 7/8
Bleh.
old-crow chapter 8 . 5/20
Hi,

I especial;;y liked the time-turner twist at the end of your story. It added an extra chapter od so of suspense to an already excellent story.

Thank you for sharing it with us.

Old-Crow
Jimbocous chapter 8 . 4/19
Nice one. Thanks!
tyrannicpuppy chapter 8 . 1/19
And a proper good ending to send us into the night. Such fun.
tyrannicpuppy chapter 5 . 1/19
What a glorious finish. All the guilty parties soundly punished for their actions. And in such amusing fashion.
tyrannicpuppy chapter 1 . 1/19
Ron. You insensitive selfish git. This chapter was beautiful. Looking forward to hoe he'll screw up next.
scottyeo chapter 3 . 12/24/2019
Nice bit of Dr. Who.
neweldi chapter 8 . 10/22/2019
Thanks, I love it :-)
missgsmith51 chapter 1 . 9/28/2019
"[Harry] knew Hedwig loved to fly but he didn't have anyone to write to, as Sirius was too far away recuperating, and professor Lupin was no good at corresponding."

Why was Professor Lupin no good at corresponding? (1) After all, he knew how to write well enough to have been both a student AND a professor at Hogwarts. (2) He also knew all of the people Harry knew in the Wizarding world, so he could offer news tidbits or discuss other issues intelligently. (3) He was surely in touch with Sirius, so he could definitely provide updates and information there. (4) Most importantly, he had known and loved James and Lily - and Harry, he claimed - so he had a never-ending supply of tales he could share with the son who had never really known them and longed to learn more.

Why should Lupin, of all people, be a poor correspondent? Has he been ordered not to write to Harry? Is he under a Compulsion spell NOT to contact Harry? Who is preventing contact between Harry and Remus? I consider this very suspicious, and so should Harry!

"[Ron's] father was already in enough trouble for leaving the enchanted car at Hogwarts." How did Arthur leave the car? Ron flew it there, and then it took off to stay in the Forbidden Forest. It has now come to Ron's aid to escape the Acromantulas and to enter his name into the Goblet. I don't remember Arthur having seen the car at all, so how could he have removed it?
MelancholyNaz chapter 8 . 9/20/2019
great storyline... I'm enjoying reading this story.. all end well
StupidChinaBook chapter 5 . 7/8/2019
How about Gemini for Harry & Hermione's Marauder name?
missgsmith51 chapter 3 . 5/12/2019
"That foul... loathsome... evil…. Manipulative…. Little cockroach!" Hmmm ... Is she referring to Ron or the Headmaster? I'd say the description fits Dumbledore to a T.

"They thought that Malfoy was slippery but the headmaster must be coated in Teflon, nothing stuck." Now, THERE'S a title for a story - "The Sticky Problem with a Teflon Wizard"! He!He!

"The lights darkened and the Great Hall started to rumble with some ominous foreboding background music." Nice mood-setting. :)
Darboria chapter 8 . 5/1/2019
I just finished reading and it was a fun read! :)
Gotta love some acidic bashing / crack fic sometime :)
Darboria chapter 6 . 5/1/2019
I read the reviews just for fun, and I'm surprised after the use of the Shadow Proclamation in a previous chapter that noone made the link with Doctor Who for this one... I mean... WHO (pun intended) has the noted habit of ripping the timelines every so often, and has that doomed nickname?
I love this silly fic btw!
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