lol...He did the old man (yoda) thing. XD

...well...CY ...plot twist

This story makes no sense. It’s like you changed the path of your story multiple times while fighting it. From a hermit naruto to a happy naruto to a evil naruto to a depressed naruto and so on and they were all done so fast it’s like reading a new story in the mid of yours

The thing that really killed this story was that I think you forgot your original plans. I mean, you made it seem like thalia would play a much bigger part, Annabeth too. I was excited for it to not be percy-centric. A decent story but a bit of a let down personally.

This was an amazing story! Thank you so much for writing this story as it was so great!

I'm somewhat speechless. (Though apparently not wordless)

Fck off! If names have power and it's not yet time for his to be said then this story had no fcken business showing them that dream! It's bad enough the dream is such a mistake, but you could've at least navigated it with a little more tact. That comment straight up tells us showing them the dream is problematic!

You better do a great job explaining why this happened or it's going to ruin this story. Tell us the Why of what just happened.

I genuinely didn't believe they dreamed of Naruto's past. It's a mistake and I really think you should rewrite the dream. In the first place it's a contrived way to force an info dump down our throats, but on the other hand it contradicts Naruto's established shaky relationship with his memories. Then there's the question of what even was the point of showing them? Why? What's prompted it?

All around that moment was a complete failure. Because of it I'm giving this a 0-10 for the first chapter of your story. It's contrived, convenient, character breaking and more importantly unprompted. This isn't a strong introduction to your story.

I'm glad you finished it, even if it took some time ;D. I get falling out of love with your story, it's happened to me and I felt like I let down my readers. But, you actually updated which makes you 10x better than me lol. Nice job dude, and nice story too! :D

This was a great experience and I'm glad you actually finished it

You put “six” twice when mentioning the tailed beasts.

hestias blush should be golden. she doesn't have RED blood but GOLDEN ichor. so she should blush gold.

Thanx for the update! Been waiting for an update on this for a ling time!

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Not bad.
The story is a bit strange in some chapters and i dont like too much the end but still a good story.

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