Its a very nice beggining but you can't just stop at the PLEASE

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEE UPDATE IT WOULD MEAN THE WORLD!

Please continue with this story i am really interested to see how this will all play out...am such a NaruHina fan

woooow! i like it!

Interesting story!

The first chapteris awesome.. don't worry about it. I hope you update soooooon

Good story so far.

Loved hope for more Naruto and Hinata soon, she seems really different wonder how they will get together.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Next chapter plz. And why is hinata in rtn mode

Ohh this first chapter looks interesting. But kinda suprised w a feisty Hinata, seems a bit ooc in humble my opinion..

Ooh Hinata got a feisty attitude lol that's a different approach indeed I like it. It's also really cute when she's shy too.

Wow I really like this one, I'm just thought that hinata is in her shy aand timid self plus his "stalker". Well I'm wrong

I like it !
More pleae!-

Nice new story cant wait to see what happens and how OOC is hinata going to be