When will this be updated? Soon I hope as I really enjoy it

So Ahsoka did take the step over to the dark side... Not unexpected but both sad and exhilarating at the same time. Ventress is dead right about Ahsoka's motive but I wonder if she can let go of all her old self. She loves Anakin and what he was to her, not Vader...

Still, we know Vader have the capacity to change (hence the entire SW-saga) so if Ahsoka joins Vader the saga can and will be different. Perhaps Vader and dark Ahsoka will rule the galaxy together as Sith or perhaps they will break free of from the dark side and help rebuild the Republic and the Jedi order.

Well, wherever this story takes us, I am confident that you will write a bloody entertaining one. Very confident. :)

Looking forward to the next instalment of your Star Wars Saga!

I am just gonna point out while this story was good but Vader knew the Emperor was lying later on. He only continue to serve him because he realized he was too far gone and he had no one else anymore.

Please continue this story

You wrote both of them very well here/

Vader is a monster...and yes, unfortunatley he does know the difference between Right and Wrong...That is the most repulsive and scary thing about him.

Snips and Skyguy are one of the most appealing things in canon (says me the veteran of a delightful teacher/pupil relationship in my youth.) and to see them at the climax of season two...

...And she says she will stay with him...heartbreaking. This will not end well.

But Vader needs love to redeem himself.

Loved it! You wrote the characters perfectly and I could imagine everything in my mind! It was like watching an episode! Good job!

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This is awesome.

Brilliant idea and thanks for writing. I liked how you wrote the confrontation between Darth Vader and Ahsoka.

Super excited for the next chapter! Both ahsoka and vader seem to have been portrayed brilliantly!

Awesome!:)

I would love a sith Vader and Ahsoka pairing, they can even have a civil war against sidious. Brilliant start, and this does not even factor in Maul, Ezra, Obi-wan, Luke and Barriss Offee. So much potential, Ahsoka can be the Galen Marek of this universe. It was theorised by Sidious that the reason why Vader was much weaker in the force than his potential dictates is that he had developed a mental block thinking his wounds hindered his power. Maybe being around Ahsoka and experiencing Anakin's power will help Vader recover.

I know that this has nothing to do with this story but what do you think of the theory that Sheev Palpaltine is Anakin Skywalker's father.

Now, this is a story I would love to see as Canon!

I always felt that the grown-up Ahsoka was a very mush alike a Jedi of old. This Ahsoka you describe feels more like the free and spirited apprentice she was in the Clone Wars, someone influenced by Anakin.

I could totally see your scenario play out for real. But compassionate as Ahsoka is, she will influence Vader far more then he or the Emperor could fathom.

I for one would gladly see a continuation of this story.

That was a good read. If you kept this style I would gladly read more of this...

Pretty good.

Since I have actually watched Star Wars, I think I can appreciate what you are trying to do. Though, I don't have the best voice for Ashoka in my head, so I don't know if you're writing her accurately or not; she has a distinct personality nonetheless, which is narrative important. You also write Vader and Sidious very well. I can visualize them perfectly. So good work on that.

In addition, your one on one action sequences are well written, and if this is a taste of what is to come in your other ongoing fanfic project, than count me excited. Seriously, you're doing great. I also noticed that you are beginning to mesh narration with character POV more. An example of that is how you write Ashoka's internal monologues. You don't append things like "she thought" to her monologues, and I like that. Like many, I'm quite use to the third person omniscient perspective due to the fact that that's all I read, but I've grown to love the more limited perspective as well.

Anyway, my favorite part is the final exchange between Vader and Ashoka. Though the scene with the Emperor was also pretty good. Good work Acastus, its nice to see that you've struck the proverbial gold by publishing a story for a show that is still active. Hopefully more people can discover your other work!