Author fiat for ruby to lose her scythe. Spin too much? I’m sure in slow motion while using her sembelence she didn’t notice... god this is classic fanfic author doing author fiat to depower people

I dunno man... I ain't too pleased about Ruby's abilities, and muscle memories, being shot down to hell... Like she should've been able to much more to the grimm, but it feels like you've nerfed her a bit too much... No offense to ya of course. The story is great, as well as the writing. It just... feels kinda wrong seeing Ruby come back from the future, only to get thrashed all over the place...

This is soo good I can't wait to see more chapters in the future, and the fact that Ruby is the winter maiden and Wiess was made the leader will be a interesting read

THIS STORY IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING OH MY GOD BUT I AM SO SO SAD BECAUSE WILL U EVER UPDATE THIS? PLEASE I REALLY WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT I HOPE YOULL BE ABLE TO COME BACK TO THIS STORY AHHHH THE WHOLE PLOT IS INSANE AND THE FACT THAT WRBY IS LED BY WEISS? im so so curious!

Normally I avoid Whiterose and Bumblebee like the plague, but this is a “tragic” time-travel fic. Which I love reading, shame it doesn’t go Lancaster. Most I’ve seen hate that ship, but I’ve always loved the idea of time-travel Jaune or Ruby getting together with their best friend.

Such an interesting story, time traveling main characters make for such Badass ideas. Not a fan of the not telling Ozpin or Team Wyvern but still very much going to be a sweet story!

This has been a fun ride. I would've liked to have seen more, especially with the twist of Weiss getting leadership instead of Ruby.

i really like this story its a lot different than i expected at first but in a good way.

All of this was fantastic so thank you for writing it

one of the best time travel fic's I have ever read
hope you continue it

This was rather awesome.

Thank you!

I’d be tickled pink to read more, so I hope you make it to a place you can write from.

I wonder when Ruby is going to tell her team about her time travel. If at all.

Weiss as team leader? Seems that "I would sacrifice my soul for her" left an impact on Ozpin.

...I wonder if Ozpin ended up hearing some of Ruby's rant that included 'time travel' in it. He's bound to suspect something though, with some of her word choice there.

hey, i know it been awhile but i wanted to ask, do you have any plans do continue this? i started reading this a couple years ago and it helped me get through so hard parts of my life. ive been thinking about this story ever since you stopped uploading. if you aren't, thats fine, but i was hoping to get confirmation
thanks

You still writing? Because If you still do, I hope that we can get another chapter of this, this book is very well written and I am enjoying it immensely