Reviews for Misplaced
Azure dragon king chapter 77 . 7/12
awesome story!
syun1998 chapter 6 . 7/7
Fuck you you just want to follow canon the choice is clear between natsu and jaune
Natsu is Awesome chapter 77 . 6/12
Awesome chapter, a bit of a weird scene here and there, but not bad. I really enjoyed reading it, even if it's mostly set up for what's happening in the future.
blueassassin996 chapter 2 . 6/7
oh man a loud snorer, Just what Beacon needs
Hotshot6 chapter 77 . 6/8
Never gonna guess what you're gonna do with Cinder, huh? She's gonna be changing into someone similar to Jason Todd, only with her ex-mentor being more like female Ra's Al Ghoul than Batman.
Dracus6 chapter 77 . 6/7
Fire Emblem Awakening and Fullmetal Alchemists Brotherhood
Sword Art Online and Tales of Xillia
Kroz Phantomville chapter 12 . 6/1
Quite a boring story. Literally nothing has diverged from canon in an entire season even with the addition of Natsu. He also doesn't even use his Fire dragon Slayer magic at all. It just felt as if I read the RWBY season 1 cartoon in text form.
rufus264 chapter 77 . 5/31
Great chapter
Ultimatrix bearer chapter 77 . 5/31
9/10 so far. I’m just waiting for the two versions of the white fang debate.

KEEP BEING AWESOME!
FireDragonSpider-Mane6 chapter 77 . 5/31
Natsu vs The Dragon Seed. I imagine the demon seed will likely be more vicious. When Natsu defeats Fafnir will he gain all of Fafnir's memories? Truthfully I always imagined that if Pyrrha gained the Maiden powers that she would go through some kind of identity crisis or a drastic change in her personality so I'm welcoming her being haunted. Want to see more of what's going on with Cinder. Rather irritated with how people keep referring to Natsu as a thing or a monster.

PS: When will we see the horror brought about the experiments with Natsu's blood?
DragonKnight Shaun chapter 6 . 5/31
Confused? no. Disappointed. Yes. You made a choice basing it on canon rules and when you decide to change your mind you cover your arse with a terrible excuse. All this shows is that Ozpin is an idiot and everyone else is as well for following along and not calling it out. there was never an "odd man out" Cinder, Emerald, or Mercury could have either been Natsu's or Jaunes' partner from the beginning during the initiation unless for some reason the rules don't apply to them and they were never apart of the initiation (which with your terrible level of storytelling could be exactly that) because you couldn't follow through you fill the story with holes. you have been leaving holes in your story since initiation, people in the reviews have been pointing them out and you are either ignoring them or trying to cover your arse with bad writing. if you cannot keep to your initial story decisions without changing your mind on a whim, I have no belief in you as an author.
Uday Sra chapter 77 . 5/31
good.
ahsoei chapter 77 . 5/31
Can't help but think u r emulating canon a bit too much when I saw Adam. Why would he go after a group that has neither Blake or Weiss?
keybladelight chapter 77 . 5/30
I can wait for nastu vs fanir and how it's going to be but and illa be harsh on weiss ouch but harsh on a dragon force unconscious nastu ok now that were she has enough call it him a "thing i make natsu make scare illa and sienna and they see a dragon in his presence.

Adam his still out there and this the one thing i hope to see when nastu regain his memories see a romance of blake x nastu and the fight i was waiting for Nastu vs Adam round 2.

Poor phyrra she now hallucinate cinder but i hope she can conquer it the fall maiden power.

Cinder his alive i hope you make her meet Neo like in vol 6 to take revenge on ruby and for taking nastu for them.

You know i think someone really need to make your story be react fanfic so that all the rwby cast all heros and all villains characters that appear in the canon franchise watch to the your story "Misplaced".
Christian Medina chapter 6 . 5/16
Your story is good! But I’m going to drop it nothing personal, it’s just I wanted Pyrrha to be with Natsu not Jaune, I know sounds weird but that’s how I am. Good luck with the story!
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