Reviews for Fullmetal Magic
Guest chapter 4 . 4/21/2018
ANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNND MOODY IS ACTING TOO CAREFREE
Guest chapter 3 . 4/21/2018
...Dude...I love both Edward and Harry and their stories, and fuck, you made Harry so out of character and Edward is lacking something...seriously why the fuck are people so intent on making Harry look like a brat in crossover fics when in canon he's a damn neglected and suffering child, both of them are suffering, don't make one hate the other just because it's your personal opinion, kind of ruins the story, Edward would be more curious about a new face, annoyed yes, but he won't fucking blow up on him, or stereotyping Harry as some week and attention seeking midget...you do know that's what the Daily Prophet and Rita Skeeter did right? This leads to the question that are you even familiar with Harry potter story-line and character traits or are you just deeming it fit to judge them from the little information you have? Harry is not an attention seeking brat nor does he consider his dangerous (they might not compare to what Edward has been through but they were life-threatening situations for a kid to be in, nonetheless) experiences something he should be fawned over, he wishes no one else has to go through them, and even morbidly considering it a positive thing that HE, Harry James Potter is going through them, because in the back of his mind, he blames himself for his parents death, HE blames himself for his PARENTS death, who died protecting their child, and he considers himself unworthy of such a sacrifice, even thinking maybe if he had died it would mean his PARENTS would be still alive, so don't go to the whole attention-seeking point, he hates, DESPISES his fame or being coddled because 1: he had to lose his parents for that, 2: he was neglected and (verbally) abused by his so called guardians so he thinks he does NOT deserve kindness. 3: He does not play 'hero', he thinks its better if it's HIM who's getting hurt rather than some other unfortunate person (plus no one listens when he informs them they need to be prepared and he can't watch friends and people he's grown close to, die in front of him like so many others). While he may not hold much comparison to what Edward has been through, you have to keep in mind that he's suffering too. Edward has suffered a lot but it is important if you're writing a crossover fic, you have to be unbiased towards the other fandom, even if you favor one of them over the other, if you have hate or dislike for one fandom, don't try to write it unless you can control your hate, otherwise it's going to affect the plot and how it comes out thus ruining the story. Edward is, like I said, missing something here, and so are the side characters, writing a story is not a piece of cake, but you're going to have to be assertive about their personalities and making their reactions accordingly as well, don't make Edward into a total war martyr, he wouldn't go around disclosing information, when he's in an unknown place, he's not going to go around being all bubbly and friendly, he's going to keep his guard up, maybe letting it down here and there when he knows its fine, and the wizards, you're underwriting them, they may be narrow minded as you put it, but only some of them are, even then they're more observant than you think, they're not just going to welcome Edward with open arms, never mind what they seem like, because the alternative world theory is far-fetched, even for them, some of them, depending on their character traits are going to treat him with suspicion, not obvious suspicion 'I-am-watching-you' and glaring but rather holding their guard up, noticing tiny details, keeping a discreet eye on him and aren't going to trust him quickly and gonna be stiff and alert around him, whereas others will treat him with caution and curiosity, looking into his background to confirm his alibi, or to note and gather information from conversations with him, questions and curiosity. Even at the least they're going to be curious. Another thing while writing crossover fics, you need to know the characters that are entering the other world, their personality and adaptability skills, how they would handle themselves in the new environment (the time in their dimension during which they had this occurrence would matter since the character development stages have to be kept in mind) and the fandom they're entering, you need to have information about their time-line, character development, traits and their skills and perception, to know how they're going to react with someone who claims to be from another world, someone they don't know anything about, someone they're not familiar with, someone who holds a power they know nothing about. I'm not expecting you to be perfect, but please at least keep the basics in mind; making one fandom all childish and annoying just to give the other the limelight is very disrespectful to the fandoms themselves.
Mys1tery chapter 13 . 9/13/2017
When is the next update? Soon I hope!
Totallynotamango chapter 4 . 4/15/2017
I started mutter what was going on (like the plot points) to myself and I honestly haven't laughed so hard in ages. Everything sounds normal when you read it but if you try to sum it up, you realize how bloody crazy everything is.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/13/2017
You had to...
I still like the original soundtrack better than the translation tho...
HamoHero chapter 13 . 1/8/2017
I'm so glad they're back together ;w;
ThisAccountWillbeDeleted chapter 13 . 11/18/2016
This story is very well-written! The characters are on point and the plot is very interesting. I'm excited to read more.
dontaskk chapter 13 . 10/11/2016
cant wait for the next Update! (P.S. it was really good of you to bring Al to this world as well, Ed did seem to change back into Old Ed in this chapter)
Koolkat chapter 13 . 10/6/2016
You better! And that three month thing at the beginning of the chapter? Yea-no. That better not happen,or I'll set the shrimp on you. "I HEARD THAT!" Uh,I gotta go! *sees Ed with blade for an arm* ACK! *runs* bye!
~Kat
Koolkat chapter 12 . 10/6/2016
*squeals* brother moments! Eeeeeeee! Love! Ed and Al,they can't be apart for more than…ever without freaking out. Eeeee!
~Kat
Koolkat chapter 4 . 10/5/2016
The SHORT time Ed was planning on being there! Haha! Short! I think I'm hilarious. I'm not. "WHO'RE YOU CALLING SHORT?!" Oh boy,I better go,I forgot to mention that I'm hanging out with Ed and-ACK! Ed,go away! "I'M NOT SHORT!" I know! I gotta go! Bye! *runs*
~Kat
Koolkat chapter 2 . 10/5/2016
I just figured out that amestrian is just scrambled up English. That's cool though. It took me that long to figure it out,and it was creative! Good combination. I usually figure things like that out rather quickly,so yeah.
~Kat
ElizabethBathog chapter 13 . 9/28/2016
Love this and looking forward for more! :D
Dragonheart4258 chapter 13 . 9/22/2016
Amazing story! Great compositions and impressive knowledge. Also I salute you for enlisting. I plan on doing the same when I graduate, which branch in not sure of. But keep up the good work!
ScarletRoofs chapter 13 . 9/18/2016
Welcome back! Great chapter. Good to see Ed and Al working together again. C'mon guys, you'll figure it out as always.
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