Reviews for Hyuuga's Downfall
Vanitas Caelum chapter 105 . 6/7
105 chapters of amazement! thanks.
MojoBlack chapter 95 . 5/25
What we all been waiting for...
MojoBlack chapter 82 . 5/25
Well done in making Hinata Powerful in this story man. One of the biggest wastes of potential in the manga/anime was having the hyugas take such a back seat to the uchihas. Not to mention not utilizing her potential as a fighter other than being a naruto cheerleader. Well done man
MojoBlack chapter 64 . 5/25
The story, love development and pacing has taken me pleasantly by suprise. Not bad. Naruto is an idiot like always lol
MojoBlack chapter 22 . 5/24
Big missed opportunity. Could of had Haku be a girl so that way she and sasuke could flirt. Oh well great story so far.
FenrirFenrisSonOfLoki chapter 93 . 2/13
Major plot hole in chapter nagato gave naruto a bit of all the taled beast chakra so he can sense them all anywhere and if they are in trouble so eight tales chakra being taken should have set off a major disturbance in the force with red flags and sirens blaring
ahileshkannan chapter 10 . 12/8/2019
Why hanabi she is like the most innocent of all this
GamerX568 chapter 105 . 12/7/2019
I never get why people build up Naruto sacrificing himself, and then have something else happen so that he doesn't sacrifice himself. I don't know the last time someone actually ended a story with Naruto's sacrifice. They usually start with it in a lot of crossovers though.
Bobbyr chapter 1 . 10/22/2019
Cliche story,the romance is poorly written and it is just generally unenjoyable
diegoossorio1 chapter 105 . 10/18/2019
2 years later i read it again and i still think that this story need a epilogue
Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2019
hi
innovaquantum chapter 63 . 7/9/2019
I don't want Jiraiya to die.
13thxenos chapter 35 . 7/2/2019
Well, this was a pretty weak ending. Seriously? Itachi couldn't talk with Sasuke for 5 minutes? Actually, he could sum up all of what he should have said in a couple of sentences!
And why the hell did Jiraya leave them?! The kids didn't even have a destination in mind, so they could have just go with Jiraya wherever he wanted to go! He just got his ass handed to him when he was in Sage mode! And Orochimaru is interested in Sasuke too! What kind of an irresponsible person leave them in this situation!?
Guest chapter 15 . 6/22/2019
If Naruto gives Sasuke that chokuto I will flip out
Guest chapter 5 . 6/22/2019
That bloodline is really lame. Not even the Adamantine Chains his mother had?
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