Reviews for MagicTale
WowohWow0 chapter 3 . 5/12
I like this I always felt that Monsters were the strong ones I don’t know why humans are
amnesia chapter 3 . 2/17
This is the gay agenda, i too would like to be protected by a buff lady in armour please and thank you
TheEverlastingHater chapter 25 . 12/12/2019
Man, that's a bittersweet downer ending...
xyzdreadnought chapter 25 . 9/26/2019
not the ending I expected, but it was a damn fine story.

I wonder if Undyne and Lousie will ever meet again.
WightGrimmBorn chapter 1 . 7/8/2019
author you are one of the few people to make me cry tears of joy and excitement from reading a fanfiction good on you my friend good on youundyne the undying is the saddest death in the entire game but you made me excited to watch a resurrect of Undyne the Undying just to kick that jackass ass love the ending by the way it's nice to know she is not truly dead
WightGrimmBorn chapter 15 . 7/8/2019
I cried tears of joy when undyne walked out with staff in hand truly a beautiful sight to behold
Guest chapter 25 . 6/30/2019
Bloody excellent. The ending chapters bring a tear to my eye. You did a great job.
Queen Bovine chapter 11 . 6/2/2019
I imagine Derflinger with John Mulaney’s voice.
ayy chapter 25 . 5/26/2019
and they all died due to the wind stone crisis. The end.
Haydoge chapter 11 . 3/3/2019
The kid recognizing him as a younger cap was a bit stupid but other than that minor thread a very fun read.
Guest chapter 9 . 12/11/2018
I like to imagine the expression is ahegao.
gabe.d.clark.1997 chapter 3 . 12/5/2018
...Guiche knows where all the food comes from, right?
Guest chapter 25 . 12/5/2018
glad you wrote this, I really enjoyed the interactions between louise and undyne :3 gl with future projects!
KiroZen chapter 16 . 12/1/2018
They watched Boku no Pico didn’t they?
Vanessa Masters chapter 25 . 8/29/2018
Her eyes fell to some unnumbered page, eyes rolling over the text carefully. She may be asked what it was about, or at least details to prove her focus.

'This GASTER creature is a monster like nothing that has been documented before.' Louise stared down at the words, blinking in confusion. 'It possesses no matter of speech I can discern, which is annoying enough! It makes the same sound to the same questions implying a level of understanding, yet the Void magic has yet to decipher his speech!'

Now her eyes widened, blinking, and hurdling over the pages.

"Huh?" She let out, confused. Her hands grasped the edges of the cover again, thick volume of pages between her fingers. She flipped the pages over, finding another bout of convenient text to read.

'My familiar of bones, pure bones, laughs as if he possesses lungs the likes of which dragons would be enamored to hold!" A skeleton familiar? No such thing existed in Tristian or the rest of the world. Except…

"Louise?" Princess Henrietta asked, and she foolishly, perhaps ignored her.

Louise was busy flipping through the pages faster, finding more text to read, finding anything that she could easily grasp.

'I've never heard of this plane creature before, but her ability to fly is something that I am sure many would be astounded to hear of from familiars, especially those who may speak!' Speaking familiars, monsters. Louise flipped to another page.

'Though slimes are common enough through the world, this one of mine appears truly unique! It holds conversations with a mixture of rhythm and sound, converses with other monsters and convinces them to dance, and has even managed to replicate its size!' Not just familiars, magical. Louise flipped to another page.

'A wizard as a familiar was something taught for the last few decades to be impossible! And yet, as I watch her float around with an armless body, this Madjick is able to work out spells outside of the paradigm schools of magic. Not only that it speaks in magic words. Please is such a grand thing to hear' Louise flipped to another page.

'A king of monsters… my familiar for my life.' Louise hovered on the page.

"Louise, what does it say?" She continued to ignore her liege, staring at the text, enthralled and terrified of the words written. She read them more carefully than she did the hundreds of citizens she had watched the past few months.

'A monstrous being with fur as alabaster as snow and fine for a king's coat. Armor golden like the sun and a spear red as the blood it may draw. Yet, he speaks with a kindness that I cannot disrespect. He fails to see me as his master, yet I can understand why. Grand as I am, having a king bow to me, that of monsters, would be an accomplishment herald in tales of yore and song.' It was difficult to breath.

'Though a king he calls himself, and appearance and strength prove him to be, he continues to converse with the commoners as if they were his equals, in a manner most undignified. Maids and cooks talk to him, bowing as they properly should, but followed by him patting their backs with a hand that could just as easily crush them like wood. Instead, he laughs, laughs as if they were speaking jokes to him.' This was him… this was who Undyne swore fealty to.

'His magic, for a king of any race must possess an aptitude of magic, is odder still than my own Void incantations. Fiery spells that are no doubt worth of an ardent name, yet with a green thumb about him reflected in the bountiful garden he has bloomed in not but a few weeks' time. The children of nearby estates visit often, and I cannot tell if they come for me, for him, or for the garden he made. They pay such attention to each.' It had to be him. It was… It really was.

'But odd that he is, I will not disrespect a familiar as grand as him. Truly this monster, the King of the Mountain, has earned his place as my familiar. Nah, perhaps I should say, as my partner, for it will be shoulder to shoulder he will assist me through this eventful life I am sure to embark upon.' Where was it… where?

'King Asgore, my monster of a familiar.' It was…


Sorta bitter sweet.

So, instead of dying they return to Undertale... alive.

Huh

I still feel bad, but hey, Louise got closure. She’s no longer a Zero, Undyne is a remembered hero and Undyne is alive somewhere and will be remembered.
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