Reviews for Futari wa Pretty Cure: A New Legend
Lulu chapter 18 . 7/10
Frankly this is wonderful chapter, I feel normally you stick way too much to how Yuusuke defeated the grongi in the series with Dai defeating exaclty the same.

Also in the end I am curious about the gorls of Yes! Precure 5 having to deal with Ryuki and then Faiz.

So if you do them in the preveiws, can you show them first in the Five Gogo and then in the original Yes! Precure 5?

So that way it will be more notiecable their change in belliefs.
ZGMF-X13A Providence chapter 26 . 6/19
Wow how nice to see a new chapter!

I say is great, plus it seems the girls have a power up thanks to Kuuga... kind of a necesarry considering they could end fighting Grongi who right now are stronger than them.

I wonder if all Precure teams will gain some sort of power related to their Riders...

Nice to see this continued, that is good.
Nexus240 chapter 26 . 6/19
Does this mean that the girls will awaken their rider powers and from my previous comment those events will happen?!
:)
yogaratw607 chapter 26 . 6/19
Woohoo new chapter arrive good job
I can't wait see new form for kuuga and other rider new form that never seen on series
Maybe you add second rider on kuuga his name is g-1
Shunya Toshiki chapter 26 . 6/19
Alright! It's about time we see another update from you!

Also love the new opening, and truth be told the first opening from the Rising of the Shield Hero is my personal favorite.

So the first of the Seeds had sprouted, and two have yet to appear. I can't wait to see what's next.

Keep up the good work.
Son of Anarchy 95 chapter 1 . 5/19
Please Next Chapter
Sebiru chapter 25 . 4/8
A trully nice story, so I want to see more of this, honestly if possible could please skip the useless episodes of Precure and Focuss on the Kuuga side?
I love this so much.

Also in your previews, I wish that you could post the preview of the Yes! Go Go and Faiz, only to see how different the girls are after having to go trough Ryuki, and then the preview for the Yes! and Ryuki to see how they are still idealistic.
Farhan Nugraha chapter 25 . 4/5
This chapter is amaizing and please update this soon
HackerEX chapter 25 . 3/31
Sorry, been a while since I did my review on this, but I was not disappointed in Ichigo vs Kuuga, great job man!

I am also very curious on how you'll handle both the possible new powers Nagisa and Honoka are getting, as well as what Rider Kengo is (My guess is that it's Black RX as it was technically the firet Heisei Rider so the possible connection is there...)
Nexus240 chapter 21 . 3/26
You know, I'm actually looking forward to the 27th chapter. Especially the part where Honoka's grandmother explains what happened after the war! As well as the introduction of the Go Grongi and Precure's rider powers!

I'll bet that Honoka's grandmother will talk about how Shocker appeared and attacked her and the children that time they climbed up the hill. And then Kamen Rider Ichigo himself appeared and saved them.

After reading all chapters of this story, I've come to the conclusion that Honoka's grandfather Kengo is none other than Kamen Rider Nigo. Nigo was well known for his rider punch in all the specials. The fact that Ichigo mentioned he needs his assistance fighting Ultimate Kuuga proves it even further, due to the fact that Nigo is the only rider close to him.

I bet that Kengo was a childhood friend of Sanae, and that during his teen years he was captured by Shocker, and they brainwashed him into attacking his friends and family. Then Ichigo with help of the Queen of Light saved him and made him remember who he was. He then decided to work together with Ichigo to protect those who he loved. Then he and Sanae got very close, while the Queen before she went home left Mipple in Sanae's care. A few years later lead to this and that, and you get the Legend of the Showa Kamen Riders.

She should also mention Saisho Hajime who was the Kamen Rider Ichigo they had met not too long ago when saving Dai.

Oh yeah, Akane should also mention something about her father being Kamen Rider V3 when they went to get shaved ice.

Also when they fight the Zakeena left behind by Regine as well as a Go Grongi that is close to beating them, then the ghosts of the first three Showa Riders appear and assist the group. They along with Dai then explain to the girls the consequences of having rider powers, like self-sacrifice, and always get back up when down, and not to lose hope. This prepares them to help Dai defeat the Grongi better.

In the first chapter of the story, you mentioned that there were 200 Grongi. I'm going to take a guess and say that this took place after Daguva was defeated and before Max Heart with Dai still alive with his rider powers. The government then gets reports that following Daguva's defeat, more Grongi were beginning to emerge, but from outside of Japan, in other countries. With that being said, Ichijo and Dai decided to go to other countries to take care of them while leaving the girls behind in Japan.
It's later that the Max Heart Arc begins along with the story of Kamen Rider Agito. They'll still remain in contact with Dai while they fight together with his successor.
This will be like in the show where Nigo first began as a Kamen Rider while Ichigo was out in the other countries stopping Shocker. Dai will soon come back later and join up with girls and Agito. And they all work together to take down the Overlord of Darkness and his lords. Dai will also gain access to his Rising Ultimate form.

Let's also have Kiriya be reincarnated and lets make him be Kamen Rider Gills. This makes a lot more sense since he used to have dark nature. As for Agito, it should be someone from Dai's world, and they would actually know each other.

Anyways this was the idea I've been having in my head after reading the last chapter. I'm just glad I'm finally saying it.
Please let me know what you think.

You're an awesome author Ashbel! Keep up the great work!
:)
tobi.zt chapter 25 . 1/13
This is an awesome chapter! I can't wait to see what the shards going into the girls will do to them.
Elemental Dragon Swordsman chapter 25 . 1/11
Love the fight between Kamen Rider Ichigo & Kamen Rider Kuuga in this chapter! :D

Though Ichigo pointing out stats during a fight seems odd in my opinion. I think you could've shown Ichigo's analysis without using stats of all things.

Things are getting really interesting now that the girls have a piece of the Amadam in them (which is an obvious Symphogear reference xD) and the fact the Grongi might be able to power-up with pieces of the defeated Dark King.

Looking forward (in future chapters) to the girls getting new forms due to the Amadam pieces! :)

Random question: Why do you use Dai's name when he's in his Kamen Rider Kuuga armor? Shouldn't it be easier to just write/type out "Kuuga" when Dai is wearing the armor and during his fights?
Dragon-XZero chapter 25 . 1/5
Nice chapter, no clue what you have planned for Dai to do now that the Grongi are boosting themselves but hey, let's wait and see I guess.

One thing I didn't like was Ichigo suddenly pulling up stats, I get you were trying to show him being analytical but something about it just rubbed me the wrong way.

Also, that last point with the shards... you were watching Symphogear weren't you, cause I can just smell the inspiration in that whole scene.

Anyway, hope you keep up the good work but...just as a word of advice, try not to blow the Daguva v Ultimate load again so soon, you really should wait a bit before the final fight occurs before you bring it up. It was already extremely weird that you decided with this route.
ZGMF-X13A Providence chapter 25 . 1/2
Amazing chapter man, I really liked it.

Is really nice to see this story got to them middle point, I was surprised to how Nagisa and Honoka haves shards of the Arcle inside them now, I think it will be interesting to see what you have planned for it.

So that is all, good luck.
Isokage chapter 25 . 12/30/2019
Great chapter, how the shards will change the girls? I will wait to the next chapter to know it i guess.
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