Reviews for The Great Red Betrayal
Alfred chapter 11 . 8/5
This story was trash
andrewtp1117 chapter 11 . 7/25
Can you please do more I really interested in the story.
Rodaani Stone chapter 3 . 7/23
It's just three chapters and I already love the story
CagraCourter chapter 6 . 5/18
Okay, I love the fix. It's one of those fics where u just turn ur brain off and have fun. But then there's times where I'm questioning my sanity. Like what, they've been dating for a month and she's already asking to get a kid like jesus
CagraCourter chapter 3 . 5/18
I love this oc
CagraCourter chapter 2 . 5/18
This made me laugh and smile so fucking much
FenreldStormblade chapter 11 . 4/3
...for a prologue this doesn't feel complete with you bringing her back...
Guest chapter 11 . 1/29
I really liked the story and it kept me very interested, will there be more parts?
jackyfloresq2001 chapter 11 . 1/16
can't wait for the next chapter in this story
Guest chapter 7 . 12/14/2019
This literally makes no sense. "I have to reject you all because my heart was broken and I cant trust or love again", followed literally by Draig saying "At least until Penemue fixed it"; you even set up that he held the same feelings for everyone BUT Rias in chapter 1. So where in the fuck is this rejection of the peerage coming from? It's like saying "I love cookies" and then rejecting any cookie brought to you.
Western-Otaku chapter 11 . 11/11/2019
That was an interesting tale, hope there is a continuation. Although I'm personally a fan of Issei's canon relationships, I also enjoyed the what if? Scenario.
Western-Otaku chapter 2 . 11/11/2019
Ok I take back what I said. Think I jumped the gun a little, too used to reading lower quality stories where this stuff just happens, for little reason, and the story moves on with no explanation/justification so you just gotta accept it and continue. Starting to see this story will be different.
Western-Otaku chapter 1 . 11/11/2019
Ngl, if Rias had the desire to sleep with a guy who wasn't Issei, I also don't think she'd be as torn up about Issei leaving as she acted here. I care for Issei, but I also don't care about his feelings and sacrifices he's had/for done for me so I'll sleep with a guy in his own bedroom in his own house... And then act like her entire family was slaughtered in front of her eyes when Issei acts like most of us would in his situation. I'd expect her to lie about what happened to everyone else, maybe even paint it that Issei left of his own accord for a lesser reason than the truth but... Whatever, the story premise is still interesting enough to see where this goes.

Was it necessary to completely change the way Issei looks so drastically over a short span of time though? If it was a year or so it'd make more sense but it couldn't have been more than a month or two right?
Guest chapter 10 . 8/24/2019
CUCK writter Keep you though to yourself first grow some ball to make a girlfriend then get cucked and write such bullcrap O wait guys like you can never have 1 cause you enjoy seeing guys with other guys and get oggasm in doing so such sad life i hope you parents regret having you and you misrable life if you really want to change go delete this shit and yeah all who support you are ones with small 1 cm dick like yourself i hope you die after reading this and yeah go fuck yourself before ruing thing for other you alredy ruined it for your parents ASSHOLE WHore
Guest chapter 11 . 8/24/2019
i wish you die son of a whore
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