Gosh damn, this story was good. The writing, plot and characters were all superb. Good job!

OH
God this story was so good! that ending scene ahhhhhh
I cannot wait to read more!

As someone who generally dislikes gender swap stories and has surprisingly strong negative feelings towards first person narrators, I have only one thing to say:

How the fuck did you manage to get me emotionally involved this quickly?

Like, at the end of the first chapter (which is really short) I already knew I was gonna skip everything else I‘ve got planned for today, including dinner, just so I could keep reading this. How did you do that? I call witchcraft. No, seriously, I don‘t know where the story is gonna lead yet, but you got me hooked.

THIS WAS AMAZING, oml, I laughed and cried and went wow and uwu for the same story, I CAN'T, I LOVE IT

they calling each other Fullmetal was so cute

while i don't really the roller coaster of trauma, pain and basically lots of emotions. this is quite nice story. really, imagine if Evelyn has limbs created by Stark and perhaps from Vibranium? either way, she can go fullmetal now

OMILORD! This is one of the BEST and WELL WRITTEN fanfic's I've read on this site. I can not express the range of emotions this story has put me through or how much I've enjoyed and absolutely LOVED every word. Like, edkjfhfdf, words can't explain how awesome this author and much I appreciate her/his existence. I don't care how long the sequel takes to come out, I will wait till MY DYING DAYS TO READ IT.

OMG what an ending. Hope the sequel's up soon!
Happy new year and best wishes!

Oohhh. Didn't see that coming.

Honestly I think Ed was due for an upgrade and further more with enough reverse engineering, Tony could patent a number cheap full-metal prosthetic limbs.

I’m so happy that this is not the end. I love this story so much and and so excited to see more! Especially with Tony! And maybe more of Ed’s alchemy? Knowing Tony, he’ll probably want to know all about the portal and how Ed actually got there XD I’m so excited!

Ahhhh! I love you so much! I know I've said it before but this is my all time favorite fan fic! May even be my favorite Fic all together! Can't wait for part two!

Thank you for the incredible story. Can't wait for the sequel!

Yay Evelyn good going now all Tony has to do fix her arm an make things good.

I am so excited for the sequel! Knowing your writing, it is going to be absolutely incredible—just like this one. I can’t wait!

And on another note, I love how you used Marvel’s technique of using post-credit scenes. That was an awesome idea.

Happy New Year!