Reviews for The First of His Kind
zixalZane chapter 18 . 7/11
Will, this is one hack off an emotional ride of a story, and i like it, hope to see the sequel soon.
WelchFruitSnacks chapter 18 . 6/22
I'm writing another review here since i was hit by a sudden thought. Am I'm the only person who wonders what happened to Dante and Bayonetta's souls in the original story? We know Dante and Bayonetta died after giving up their powers and getting caught by the GiW, but what I want to know Did Cereza, despite being a normal human still, most likely got dragged to the Inferno like all of the Umbra Witches? Dante is kind of a wild card too. He isn't evil of course, but I'll eat my shoes if Paradiso let him in, with him being the Son of a powerful Demon after all. Ghost Zone I can't see him going to, so was he sent to Inferno too? Because if the Devil May Cry Demon World and The Inferno are the same place and not different dimensions, with Phantom Devil! Dante and his Bayo having no powers to defend themselves from many enemies who might want revenge...Yikes. OR, Paradiso DOES, take one, only to imprison them in some Heavenly Jail to keep them from each other in even death out of sheer spite. Either way, not a peaceful afterlife unless I'm wrong. At least this version of Danny's parents are in the clear.
The Half-Dead Prince chapter 18 . 6/19
Aww, i love supernatural.
WelchFruitSnacks chapter 18 . 6/19
It is good to have you back, stay safe out there man. This chapter had some spelling and grammar errors, but other than that it was great! It was nice to see that this Fenton Family ( sans Jazz but i'll get into that later ) cares about their son and aren't her der ghost bad and evil her der like so many stories. If they encounter any angels or demons, maybe they can start creating anti Inferno and anti Paradiso tech ( that's not tagged to Danny ) because boy they are gonna need it.

's first weapons sound interesting, one has a trigger, so we can be looking at a gun blade, or maybe Nero's Red Queen, while the other one being segmented might be Chain Whip like Ivy's from Soul Caliber. Could be wrong, though. Either way i'm sure that they will be cool as his bio parents, and can't wait to see them in action and to hear their names. Plus, when Rodan joins in, that is when the real fun begins. Fingers crossed that Danny gets his version of Pillow Talk and Chernabog, my favorite Bayonetta weapons. Oh and if you need weapon ideas, i can give you some ideas too if you don't mind.

2. Oh Jazz, Jazz, Jazz. I'm so used to stories where Jazz is the one who protects Danny through thick and thin from their parents, seeing this was jarring. Not that It's actually bad!, it's good and refreshing to see. But man i flinched at that bastard line. At first i thought it was Maddie who hit her, so when it was DANNY who did it i knew that is going to be big down the line if she tells the wrong person who can be Dante or Bayonetta's enemies in disguise about her brother's "freakishness".

Not to mention that title card Loose Lips with the image of Jazz holding her mouth in surprise could be foreshadowing. But Jazz has to face reality that she was wrong, Ghosts and so much more exist in this world, and not if but WHEN Paradiso and Inferno start crawling out the woodwork, hopefully she and Danny will have that behind them. Hopefully. Also on the bright side of this, this can give the Phantom Crew hints as what manipulation looks like, so they can sniff out Spectra faster than canon. Hopefully.

3. What's this?! A good and competent GIW?! The sky is falling i say! Also...Oz? Red Gold? White Pink? Black Dark Red? Yellow Dark Green? Is that...RWBY by chance? Because that will be amazing if true. But i have one burning question. What about Danielle? Since this Vlad is not a creep, that means no attempted cloning. So she is either A) Still a clone but she comes from somewhere else, or B) She is Danny's younger sister that Dante and Bayo had, but somehow got to keep her unlike her eldest brother and only a very VERY few know of her existence. Though it'll make a bit more sense if it was A to me since there was no mention of her when we got to see Dante and Bayonetta again.

Can't wait for the next update, and stay again stay safe out there!
Richard1081 chapter 18 . 6/19
Good to see a new update and hope that part two comes out soon, also interesting twist with the guys in white being good guys anyways hope to see more crossovers in part 2, and if Jazz thought ghosts being real was bad then I am curious to see how she will react to the fact that nearly every form of supernatural creature exists.
devilzxknight86 chapter 18 . 6/19
Lol using ozpin from rwby lol

Cable in x men had a super computer shaped in a cube. Mother computer I think that’s what he called it. Did everything time travel hologram projects.
aquestionableprecence chapter 18 . 6/18
Thanks for updating, and please do so as soon as you can
Justus80 chapter 18 . 6/18
Glad your back I was hoping for more and the fact that the guys in white want to help instead of killing Danny makes it awesome I mean there supposed to work for the government you’d thinke they observe and report before going all shoot first shoot some more and when the shooting stops see if anyone’s still alive to question later. I’m guessing this means Danny’s is going to be one of earths main defenders between the supernatural again which is awesome. Also yeah I’m sorry I wasn’t really feeling the Jazz part either but hey what can you do. Still I hope you update soon can’t wait for the next chapter.
Luiz4200 chapter 18 . 6/18
The GiW and the MERF being the same people explains why the uniform color was the only difference. Great idea!
stephanieeiche10 chapter 18 . 6/18
I'm glad you got back into writing. I thought you might be coming down with this COVN19 virus and you would never came back.
Guest2 chapter 17 . 6/9
Hey, haven’t updated in a while. Hope everything is alright. This was a good chapter, if your having any trouble coming up with some ideas for this story I’ll gladly help pinch in some ideas.
Guest chapter 17 . 6/9
Hope everything is alright, please update soon.
Richard1081 chapter 17 . 11/3/2019
Cool chapter and nice idea for Jazz
Link Shadowfox chapter 17 . 8/30/2019
Jazz being a villain, that's not something one sees very often in DP fanfiction. Should be interesting. Can't what for the next chapter, and the new ideas you have.
Zen-Aku The Spirit Of The Wolf chapter 17 . 8/28/2019
i respect the code lyoko
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