Reviews for The Fantastic Undead
IF-Today-Was-Different chapter 13 . 8/14/2019
Okay, so no wonder I can relate to you so much in this... The exact same thing happened to me earlier last month when my Dad found out the I was “struggling with my sexuality” (I’m gay, I wish he would just say that) but because of my parents religion, I am considered wrong and confused and I have feared for about a year all the time that my parents would disown me and our relationship would fall apart which has been happening, although they haven’t disowned me, I think it might happen once I turn 18. I don’t even know if my Mom knows yet, I haven’t said anything about it other than I was still their little girl. When my Father found out, it was because he had went through my text messages with my best friend and the only person who I’ve actually told.
Phoenix-Inferno18 chapter 6 . 4/24/2018
Hey just stopping really quick to point this out while it is fresh in my mind. On this chapter you call the cat misses Norris instead of Mrs. Norris. I thought maybe this was an error but if not and it turns out I am just being a pudding head then sorry. Don’t wanna be the grammar police or anything but thought you might want to know. It’s not that big of a deal anyways but... yeah

Rambling done
Guest chapter 13 . 3/12/2018
Hi!

So I have a couple of things to say. I really really enjoyed what you wrote of the story! I think though it seemed a little rushed at times (not a lot, though), and the Ron/Harry ship was also a little sudden (though the idea is actually not bad and I would be interested in reading more fics about that), the plot and overall writing is really well done! The characters are intriguing, especially how you wrote Vlad.

I understand what it’s like to have a vent fic - my parents are mostly supportive of the LGBTQ community, but my mom doesn’t exactly think that there are more than two genders. So she doesn’t really believe that pansexuality is a thing, plus the fact that she thinks I’m too young to make that decision (I’m 14) and is worried I’m labeling myself wrongly. So when I (accidentally, but that’s another story) came out, she didn’t believe me. We’ve been in violent denial ever since.

The point is, i get your stance and am glad that you’re at a better place now and finally decided to go with the “fuck it” attitude because that’s the best attitude honestly. I enjoyed what you’ve written so far and am glad to have come on this journey with you! :)

Sorry for the long review. Just wanted to say all that haha
LK2 chapter 13 . 1/16/2018
Well Im sad your ending it but can see why also read the sob story and I gotta say that really sucks and if you relate to Danny in this story it's probably worse than I'm thinking I just hope things get better for you soon and you get a awesome girlfriend (you are female and I'm not totally screwing up right?) who treats you right tho I'm just some person you don't know so this doesn't really matter(I don't think I know you... are you from Oregon?)
kimcat chapter 12 . 1/4/2018
So far I'm liking the story although I must admit the Ron Danny thing does seem a little forced. I would recommend not pandering to the votes as it were and keep with the original direction you had intended. I have no problem with the paring itself mind u but when it's shoehorned in it is rather distracting.

Keep at it
dontaskk chapter 13 . 1/4/2018
while i am sad you won't be writing this story anymore, im, surprisingly okay with it. this story was your coping mechanism and it served its purpose. im glad that the rough patch in your life is gone, if its any closure i identify as asexual. i look forward to reading any more fics you'll write
onewhodies chapter 13 . 1/3/2018
This was a great read throughout so I am glad to have read what you wrote!
Cyroclastic chapter 13 . 1/3/2018
aww it was nice while it lasted
will you be continuing your other fics like the marvel one transdimensional bonds tho?
trninjakiller chapter 12 . 10/24/2017
Well this brilliant story turned into a slash. Bye.
Anna McNarin chapter 12 . 10/22/2017
I am lost on where exactly you're taking this, you've got a lot of threads that don't quite go together. Ex, first putting Snape in the position of surrogate father but then you switch to Vlad. For a lot of this tale it was about Danny adjusting to his new life, then the plot switches and now he has to save the world from Dan? Deciding to ship Ron & Danny is massively out of the blue and more than awkward since there was zero build up to it. I wouldn't have had a clue you were leaning that way except for the bold RonxDanny in an author's note.

Also, why are you misspelling Slytherin? And Argus, not Algus; writing Ravenclaw with a capital C? It's distracting.

I'm sorry for sounding nit picky but you have a really good base story and seem to have lost sight of it, is all. Maybe brainstorm where you want this to go next and see if it fits with the rest? Rework some scenes with Ron to show a growing friendship? Ask a beta for help catching mistakes?

Don't stop, because you can only get better. I only hope this helps.
Miriam1 chapter 1 . 9/7/2017
This is interesting. I had not seen a Harry Potter/Danny Phantom crossover that incorporates the information from "Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them. " This is a new one.

It actually works with Jack Fenton having an ancestor who was violently anti-ghost. America in Harry Potter's universe is dark and frightening. I didn't realize that it could be worse than Wizarding Britain, but that is now canon. :shivers:

I look forward to reading further.

Sincerely,
Miriam
Kiomori chapter 12 . 9/3/2017
I have been enjoying this story. It's a unique take on the DP/HP crossover idea. I'm hoping at some point he can see his old friends and Jazz again too. Hopefully someone can get that tag off Danny soon so he doesn't have that hanging over his head when they're being cornered by Dan.

Personally I'm more of a fan of gen fics with romance at a minimum. Just a preference. This story seems like it's more based on family, friends, and trying to save themselves, and less on pairing up. And Danny and the others are a little young for it anyway, I'd think. Anyway that's just my opinion on it!
LK chapter 12 . 8/14/2017
Thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work (-)
RusEmp chapter 12 . 8/5/2017
Nooooooo! Stupid ships! Why should they always ruin stories for me! Fate is cruel.
Kimera20 chapter 12 . 8/5/2017
ohhhhh danny and ron ship looks adorable! i love this!
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