T.T rayos! la ultima parte me desgarro el alma ,fue ...muy emocional,me encanto

Why would you do that to me. What type of emotional manipulation is this ?! I thought it was just going to be a marco x luffy short but you had to throw thatch into it and make my heart bleed tears

Oh my, I’m actually tearing up...I really like this take on a bit more mature and wise Luffy. The song by the way, is absolutely beautiful!

Don't worry, I didn't need my heart. Pesky things, hearts. Thank you for crushing mine to a pulp...

this is not the last chapter, right?

Ouuuuuch! And to think this started out so sweetly!

The end of the story was kind of heart-breaking :( but this is my first time reading a FanFiction about this pairing so it’s kind of refreshing. Thank you for writing this!

What happened?! This is too sad for these lil vanilla beans!
This should be a super long awesome story full of love and tragedy.
I'm really getting romeo and Juliette vibes here.

It was so good! Why did you make it sad! Loved it though, thank you!

i hope you'll add another chapter for when ace found out. hehehehe.

I'm crying so bad right here TT~TT
Even that... I love(truly fell in love) your fic!
I don't have any word to say but perfect
PD. Marco is sexy as hell!
~Read~you~soon~...please more MarcoxLuffy

*sobs* you cant do that to meeeee

Yo there...
Here I was, reading a so much enjoyable story... and then... you go and break my heart like that... I'm at university waiting for my lesson to begin and almost crying. Good I have long hair, damn.
If you don't understand, it's a praise. You succeeded in moving me beyond realization. I had to catch my tears before they escaped my eyes... good job.
See you! ~Korazan

P.S. I'm gonna cry all the afternoon mourning, feel responsible.

Amazing!

I'm pretty sure your side story killed me. I've been thinking how cute this fix was and then you killed was a brutal, bloody murder I tell you and now I feel very betrayed.