Am i the only one DISGUSTED?
Is this supposed to be Romance?
Is there Love in this story or only horny whores and dogs?
Clark became an horny dog in 2 chapters...
I'm dropping this shit.
Bye.

love it

what a great story. we got to see every bad guy and every heroine. i thought we would see a bit more of those staying in smallville with martha and wonderwoman and big barda. i enjoyed how this story had more plot than sex scenes. really can't wait until you do your next story. if i may suggest, i would like to challenge you to write a story like this using cyclops (scott summers). he gets too much hate on this site and not enough love.

Very good chapter, especially the hot scene. The only thing I wish is that all, or most at least, of Clark's other lovers were involved in the end. A full fledged o,r,g,y, or culmination of all of his times with his lovers. It, for me, would've been a great way to end this chapter by going all out. Still it makes sense for this to end it with Karen, putting Kara's presence aside, since Clark and Karen was how this fic began. You still a good job anyway although I personally hope you'll go all out for Sara and most of her lovers when you end it. A nearly full party for everyone.

I know Lex will fall into darkness, but now it once more looks like he's on the path towards redemption again. Hopefully he'll be good for a very long while before falling into darkness. Also, is Otto someone important ? And in addition, what does your head canon tell you in regards to how your version of Lex fell into darkness ?

The ladies figured that there'd probably be another threat after Brainiac, but I don't know what can top him and Darkseid, except maybe Trigon or what threat could be larger than the destruction of the multiverse.

You were right in regards to the timeline resetting, the Legion being back in the timeline for example and the moon still shining in the sky. Clark truly saved the day.

Good to know that Cadmus is mostly destroyed.

There's another thing I do wish had happened, and that's Lucy also getting powers. Unless I missed something, it seems like all of the ladies except for Lucy and Tess have powers. Speaking of Lucy, does she know his secret, as in his powers, being from Krypton, and the Fortress ?

In regards to your future projects, I'd personally like to suggest something new please. When you write your next harem fic, and the main character who also gets the harem is female, I'd like to suggest making it a more diverse harem in regards to g,e,n,d,e,r. Instead of the heroine's harem being all women, perhaps you could make her more evenly bi with a fair mixture of both females and males for her harem. She'd have both many female and male lovers while the females within the harem would hook up or get involved with not only their fellow ladies but also the male ladies.

Now that this fic is over, I'd like to say that you did a fantastic job writing it, thanks very much for doing so, it's been a fun read, and a great treat. Well done. You're also welcome for commenting, following, and reading this story and good blessings on your future projects.

I'll be reviewing your new chapters for "Under The Hood" shortly.

Have a very good day.

Very good chapter, and Clark sure cut it close when saving the multiverse. He succeeded and is most certainly a hero. Now I'll have to see if the timeline was reset so that the moon is back in existence.

Who was the goth girl in the afterlife ? I don't remember her on "Smallville" or anywhere else.

It was a very nice touch for Clark to have a reunion with his dad, and very well written.

It looks like the biggest threats to the world are gone now with the end of Brainiac Prime, Zod, Doomsday, Cadmus I'm guessing, and the banishment of Darkseid. Now Earth should have many months of piece following this fic's end, perhaps even a year of it.

What happened to Earth Prime that caused it to come to an end ?

I was hoping Clark would meet Mxy!

this was awesome hope there is sequel

awesome

Awesome.

Good chapter, and the battle seems to be swinging back and forth in regards to victory. As for Brainiac Prime's words, it sounds like nothing is random and there's a method to his madness, hence why he doesn't care that he's being confronted by his enemies.

I thought this fic was set on Earth Prime, not an alternate Earth. Why would Brainiac send some of his enemies to Earth Prime ? How does that help him either destroy the multiverse or download its information, whichever one he's planning ?

So, were the Legion pulled back into the future or erased from the timeline, and if the former, who and why did they pull the Legion back into the future ?

I totally did not expect that Lex to be an LMD. Does this mean that the Lex who was with Lillian this whole time was the LMD and if not, when did Lex switch places with the LMD and was he able to feel the effects of the time quakes and retain his memories because he was an LMD ? In addition, while I know there are LMD's in Marvel Comics, are there also LMDs in DC comics ?

Come to think of it, is this final arc with Brainiac your own take on one of those multiverse Crisis storylines from the comics, either with all of the alternate Earths being merged together or taken apart ?

brainiac prime said that the Future Legion members wouldn't go to help their rivals. Why would the other Legion members be considered rivals to the Future members ?

Hopefully Cadmus will be completely destroyed due to the information Lex gave to Tess.

Have a very good day.

Amazing chapter.

awesome

Good chapter. Why didn't the drone care too much about not succeeding in killing Clark ? What did he mean about having everything he and his brothers needed ?

When I said Brainiac could be everywhere at once I didn't expect to be that literal. While Darkseid can attack the whole Earth brainiac can attack across all of time.

So apparently, from what was written within this chapter and what I remember of this fic, if Clark dies, many of his lovers will also die while the ones still alive in the past will never meet, Smallville will be destroyed by the military, Ares will conquer the entire North American continent and most likely the rest of the world, and either while he's doing it or afterwards, Brainiac Prime will absorb all knowledge from this planet and will then destroy it and the whole timestream. Am I correct ?

Based upon Imra's knowledge, Lex will still become a villain and Clark's enemy within your fic's universe. Too bad and it really looked like he was changing. This must be another example of Lex being a complicated person.

Why would the heroes want younger Clark's memories to be erased ? I don't think younger Clark remembering the drones would cause adverse effects to the timestream.

Have a very good day.

awesome

Good chapter, and this is very bad. Sounds like, based upon Indigo's words at the end, Brainiac Prime is in another time period.

Lex certainly gave his momthe business right back, and I see that I was correct in that the alien who was released inside of Cadmus was Brainiac. And I don't even feel sorry for Lillian.

Brainiac Prime seems to be more powerful than Darkseid within this fic in that, unlike Darkseid, Brainiac Prime has the ability to be almost everywhere at once.

After reading this chapter, I will say that while Martha and Connie have not become Clark's lovers, I will say that it's actually nice that he also has a real mother and sister figure in his life instead of all of the women being his lovers.

Hopefully Lex will be able to help against the Brainiac Prime menace.

Why in the world would Lara think of letting Indigo return to Brainiac ? That would've been a very bad idea and good thing she decided not to do so.

Have a very good day.