Reviews for this angel has lost her wings (i'm building a monster)
Zer0.main chapter 2 . 7/10
asdfasd i was going through things i'd subscribed to and i found this and,,,, oh my god i would love to read more of this! i really hope that you're able to find motivation to write!
Guest chapter 2 . 7/7
This is SO good, would really wish to read more;;;
kaylin k chapter 2 . 6/7
Keep writing, its really good.
Valen Goncalvez chapter 2 . 6/3
I will look forward to the next chapter!
Clinquants chapter 2 . 3/25
this entire story was a creative and absolutely beautiful idea! i love the story and plot and can't way for future chapters! good luck on working on them, writing can be tedious unfortunately!
BloodRedJay chapter 2 . 1/21
Um, so I like this, it’s great, but that isn’t what genderfluid means. At all. Being genderfluid means someone’s gender changes from time to time. The time can be super short (multiple flips in one day) or super long (practically any period of time). They usually have preferred pronouns that change, and can be anything (female, gender neutral, male, etc) yes, one of the genders they switch to can totally be a state of feeling like both genders at the same time, what you describe Skull-Sakura as in here, but that’s actually called being bigender, I believe (forgive me if I’m wrong about that, I know more about genderfluid than bigender).

Sorry if you do actually know what you’re talking about, in which case, the way you worded it isn’t the best. “Skull is genderfluid, meaning he feels he is both male and female.” isn’t right. If you replace genderfluid with bigender, it is, or if you say something like “meaning he feels he is sometimes male and sometimes female” with genderfluid, then that’s also right.

Anyway, for some reason I felt the need to go on a massive rant about this, sorry. I do really like this story, though, and hope to see more from it sometime in the future~!
VVGirl chapter 2 . 1/4
loves it~!
ephemeral-times chapter 2 . 9/24/2019
Are you not going to post anymore?
SilentWrld20 chapter 1 . 8/19/2019
I like it. Please continue!
Kami no Kage-Sama chapter 2 . 6/4/2019
You could make her flames propagate her chakra reserves, her self healing (canon), the effectiveness of her genjutsu (like timing and potency) and iryojutsu, her strength and senses (both natural and chakra-enchanted), her weapons (durability, quantity and quality), you could make her propagate anything in a enemy body (like blood, lung damage, liver damage, creating tumors).
And who will you pair them (Skull) with? I vote for Fon, Colonnello or Reborn (or all three :3)
thecatleader chapter 2 . 3/23/2019
Ohohoh I like this especially when Reborn was punched through the wall. I hope this will be completed someday.
Newest Reader chapter 2 . 11/28/2018
This is a brilliant take on Skull in a crossover fanfiction. Please update soon. This is too good to be left alone. I know you said no pairings, but you should totally pair Skull with Fon.
Immortal ninjaaa chapter 2 . 11/24/2018
Please update. This is your best story so far and has a good premise.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/16/2018
Three words

I love it
AzureLazuli chapter 2 . 6/23/2018
This idea is amazingly fun! Sakura as Skull! It fits sooo well! I'm a little sad we didn't get to see the fallout from her/him punching Reborn, but from a writing standpoint that was a great place to end the chapter! And yes, this review is getting ALL THE EXCLAMATION POINTS! :D
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